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By: Cinnamontea
folder +S through Z › Xiaolin Showdown
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 4
Views: 3,526
Reviews: 10
Recommended: 0
Currently Reading: 0
Disclaimer: I do not own Xiaolin Showdown, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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I would like to start off by saying thank you to those who have reviewed and were cool about it and like the fic so far,

This is for Kachie-Chan

Here goes: To start.The caracter Kami is suppose to be opposite of Ashely. Nice, sweet. And if she were to be a villain's side kick, why should that be any exception? The rat thing is what is opposite of cat. I love rats in actaulity there for my characters do as well. I wish people would not judge to harshly on them. I apologize if the character is not interesting enough for you.And plus she is just teasing and being cute about the rat trappie thing.

Second:I thought I could picture Jack actually running slam into a locker of this chick he is destined for. It is always been my idea of love that the two in love fall in love by some act of fate. Plus I thought it funny the thought of Jack Spicer running into a locker and falling flat on his ass.\
Uh I have checked for his age and could not find it. And....I do not hear anyone else complaining so....deal with it Dude.

Third: I could not help the fact that Ashely is hated by Jack and that might stand between a boyfriend girlfriend relationship between Kami and Jack. I decided to try and make it interesting like that.

Fourth: She is 'prefect pants' because Jack needs saved from evil...though I do not see Jack as evil. But I do it in all my fics. The bad boys I use are saved by a beautiful angelic like woman. I am sorry but that is how I write. By the way, how do you know I'm sweet and nice?* Big Smile*

Okay well there you have my feed back Thank you for being honost. But I write for fun, and try not to prefect it. But any review is nice.
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