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June 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thank god! An update!! I was becoming desperate!! I'm in the middle of exams right now and from time to time I check out FFnet for updates as a way to relieve stress. But there has been no updates in any of my favorite stories!!! I'm becoming desperate! Then I saw this new chapter! Thank you!!! I made my day! It's 3 AM and I'm reading fanfiction's when I should be in bed; that's just how desperate I am. Thank you again!! xD
So Sunny accepted the sparkling... Can't say I surprised, the story would be boring whithout it XD Will ravage tell Megatron? She will definately tell Soundwave so I guess it's up to him.
When I read that they were going to send Sunny away I was like: NOOOOOOO!! xD but then I thought: Hey! That's actually a great opportunity to raise the sparkling away from knowing eyes! Brilliant! But Sunstreaker will feel realy abandoned.. :o Poor Sunny!
Update soon, pleeeeeease!
So Sunny accepted the sparkling... Can't say I surprised, the story would be boring whithout it XD Will ravage tell Megatron? She will definately tell Soundwave so I guess it's up to him.
When I read that they were going to send Sunny away I was like: NOOOOOOO!! xD but then I thought: Hey! That's actually a great opportunity to raise the sparkling away from knowing eyes! Brilliant! But Sunstreaker will feel realy abandoned.. :o Poor Sunny!
Update soon, pleeeeeease!
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September 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Its one of those rare stories. An intresting idea, good writing. I like it.
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June 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story has me on the edge of my seat! It's cool to see Megatron almost accidentally finding himself in the position of being therapeutic to someone. And I like this take on Sunstreaker - I usually think of him as just an egotistic ass, but he's suddenly very interesting when he has serious insecurities. I haven't seen the concept that one of a pair of twins is flawed or cursed like this before, and I'm finding it very interesting. And now of course it's a cliffhanger - Sunstreaker has been CAUGHT by Ratchet, what will happen now??? :D
One point I think could use clarified - I've seen several stories where split-spark twins are unable to get pregnant because of only having half a spark. Also several stories where only bonded couples can conceive. But I'm not sure in this story whether I'm supposed to be giggling to myself that one or both characters may discover they are knocked up soon, or whether I'm supposed to know it's not a possibility.
One point I think could use clarified - I've seen several stories where split-spark twins are unable to get pregnant because of only having half a spark. Also several stories where only bonded couples can conceive. But I'm not sure in this story whether I'm supposed to be giggling to myself that one or both characters may discover they are knocked up soon, or whether I'm supposed to know it's not a possibility.
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i love this story and i hope you keep puttin' up chapters <3