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for The General and the Firelord

by kagato23

person RyuaAlba
schedule August 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed that much more than I thought I would. Nicely in character, and I do enjoy a bit of smacking around in my sex scenes.
person DatMurph
schedule July 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
>The General gave a little cooing noise at what she found there. “Aw, Tiny Zuko, you feel so cute!”

>The Firelord bristled. “I am neither cute nor tiny!”

Golden reference to the Bending Battle short. GOLDEN!

The image of Toph running after Zuko trying to stabby stab his butthole with a badgermole phallus while both are fully clothed was fucking HILARIOUS.

Great to see you writing again kagato!