rate_review Reviews

.... Okay. Just read all this stuff. Conclusion, YOU ARE AWESOME! The domists thingies are here, right? Anyway, very curious. And I really wanna know why zim doesn't need his PAK anymore? Is it not functioning at all? Is that why no spider legs?

Interesting story so far. It seems like as the chapters have gone on I'm noticing more and more grammatical and spelling errors. Sometimes it is glaring and a little annoying, other times it is fairly minor. I have always liked IZ fics and peoples interpretations of Dib and Zim as characters beyond the cartoons. Your interpretations are interesting and fun. Although I think that both are a bit too masochistic for my taste. I've always liked the idea of Dib and Tak having affection for one another but never really saw Zim and Dib being anything more than friends/foes.

Looking forward to the next chapters! Word of advice: Write a little slower and read back through paragraphs. You'll make fewer mistakes and notice more that need to be fixed.

Fucking-wow! Drama! More I say, more!! *dies*

Mores? Mores please? ^.^

I think I am somewhat addicted to your story now, teehee. ^-^ I hope you post another chapter when ya get the time/ideas..er..whatever its called.
:D I love it so far.
kiku

Oh wow...just WOW. You have written a idea I had for these two for YEARS (I just couldn't figure the way to write it...) you pull Dib and Zim off beautifully. I love how Dib is so insane-yet-sane when it comes to Zim...and of course the whole 'Your mine Zim' thing is full of WIN. I seriously love the hints of things to come. I am amused at Zim's 'ehh noooo wait yessss' feelings for Dib. Chapter 14 reminded me of Higurashi first season ending. I could SEE Dib as Keiichi and Zim as Rena. I might just draw that later. XD

Also glad to see more DibxZim goodies! I'm a sucker for seme-Dib/uke-Zim but its so rare to find. Keep up the awesome work, I'll be keeping my eye on this fic for a longgggg time. X3

Yes! More! More! It's getting really good....

I too suspect Nathan is really Zim. I can't wait to see what happens next! *Is hoping for buttsmexings*

It's interesting, so stop being lazy. *waggles her finger at you* Put up more chapters and get this bad boy done.

Also, I too suspect Nathan, if that is his real name, of being Zim. But who knows really, the disguise is almost tooo good to really be Zim. Maybe Dib just has a fetish for short men that love snacks and have reddish eyes?

Can't believe no one has reviewed this yet. I suspect that Zim is Nathan xD Betcha it's Zim. I bet you 20 doughnuts! But this story is very good. I love the humor in the fifth chapter. Especially the part where Dib smacked his forehead. xD Or maybe it was the 4th chapter. I'm sure that it's the fifth, but hilarious! I must ask for more