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Not sure about the X mean referance, but wasn't that whole bit about the grandma a bit harsh. I mean sure families fight and all, but to complete cut a person out like that? And I just don't understand why the grandma would be so against Clair going to college and making something of herself. I know people can be stubborn and set in their ways, but to be honest, that whole bit came off as just a little too much.

Wow, intense. Man, that sucks, having Carina crying. But you over looked the quickest way to cheer her up, don't forget, they have a monkey on hand. I'm sure Huggy could manage just fine.

Grandma Drakesford looking to take advantage of the super powered kids? Maybe try instill a little work ethic? Heh, the teens agreed not to use their powers much, but that won't stop Carina from speeding things up a little bit. I can just imagine Violet dragging Tobey off for a literal role in the hay. I pity him though. I don't know what people see in that stuff, it's pointy as heck and it sticks to clothes like glue.

Not bad so far. And don't worry I'm sure you'll manage.

Well, that's the fun of it, challenging yourself, discovering what you can really do. There are a ton of possible plots to work with this. The akwardness of being in such close quarters. Perhaps have Becky and the others decide not to use their powers unless they have to, to not draw attention to themselves.

Maybe have Tobey and Violet get lost in the woods. At first Tobey is totally freaking out. But Violet is just so calm and goes with the flow. Tobey really learns something about Violet and really sees her in her elemant for the first time.

And of course all the different things they can do. Like exploring caverns or maybe the grand canyon. This country has so much to offer, if people are only willing to look for it. Maybe have Becky start to get annoyed with her dad's upbeat attitude. But then as she sees him in these various places and really seems to know what he's doing, maybe she comes to understand her a little bit.

And of course not to mention the challenge of visiting places like the grande canyon with a two year old that can fly.

Nice to see them in a slightly quieter setting. Though I think you rushed through the water park scene a bit too quick. Nothing wrong with taking your time and adding in a little more details. Man I can't stand people who publicaly comment on how other people are handling their kids. That woman's lucky she didn't try to confront Becky, when she came to pick up Carina, or she would have gotten her hair washed, the hard way.

Oh good god, I can't even begin to imagine everybody cramped up together in an RV. This is going to get seriously akward. Of course they're going to have to place a temporary ban on making out, or sex in such tight quarters. Can you imagine Violet and Tobey walkin in on Becky and Tim at the wrong moment? I know Becky's made peace with Tobey, but there would be serious temmptation.

Nice to see them relaxing. Yeah, math always killed me too. So, have you decided wether or not to make Violet pregnant too? As for next season. Two words, famil vacation. Becky's mom and dad decide to buy a huge RV and cram everybody into it, for the mother of all road trips.

Never mind the akwardness that such close quarters would bring. I just realized we have no idea how Caelum and Emma would handle downtime. We've only ever seen them fighting or having sex. They have no real experience with just relaxing and having fun. And you know Tobey would be straight out of his element out on the road. No robots, no mansion, he'd be lost. Of course Violet lives for that kind of thing. So of course she'd want to expose her boyfrind to it. Tobey, not wanting to upset Violet, plays along, but you know it's driving him nuts.

You think you could pull a whole season of them on vacation, going to different places and having adventures. And finally interacting with Huggy aghain. I mean Becky almost never spends time with him anymore. Don't worry about the city, Becky could always Gladiator and his crew if they could substitute for a month or two.

Nice chapter. But never underestimate the power of pure chaos. It can never be truly defeated, just pushed back. Don't count Chaos out just yet. He may slink off to a dark corner to lick his wounds, but he's always be there in some way. If not face to face, than hiding in the shadows manipulating others to do his bidding.

But all that for another day. Now I think time for a little down time.

Ooh, final show down. This should be intense. But also, I can't wait for a few peaceful chapters after this. Well, relatively peaceful.

Actually, that was me. I must have forgotten to add my name. Sorry.