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Ok, no offense, but there are there are other ways to make up new baddies, that playing to stereotpyes. I mean Arabian Bomber and now this? What's next, an overwheight Elvis impersonator? And every baddy in town doesn't have to join the ring. We don't want the group getting too big. I know Team Alphanumeric is getting bigger, but some baddies should still be able to manage on their own.

That is a good idea, though. For all their strength, Team Alphanumeric can't be everywhere. Sooner or later, the numbers are going to start catching up to them.

Heh, that is a fun idea. Of Carina would have to come into court as Wordgirl's daughter, os her identity would have to be protected. Of course they have special screens they put up around the witness stand, for witnesses who prefer not to be identified. But they'd still have to use an alias.

I could imagine trying to find a costume for herself, in the most appropriate place, her parents closet. That could lead to some akward moments. Maybe a towel for a cap, rubber gloves from the kitchen, some left over ski goggles. Of course, Becky would have to gently explain to her daughter. And Becky and Tim could sit around trying to come up with super hero names for Carina. Of course, they'd get totally caught up in how cute the names were, which would annoy the living heck out of Carina.

Ultimately, it's up to you, but whatever you come up with, should work fine.

I meant that as an after thought. Honestly, after the DA was humiliated last time, there's no way any judge would take any charges they made now serious. I just meant that they're case would have had more of a threat to it if they'd gone for this the first time.

Well, she's older now and I see her as the lucky stiff who just naturally gets a great figure as she developes. If if she doesn't, if mommy can get her a whole house full of toys, dresses and baked goods, I think she should be able to manage plastic surgery.

By the way, it's Mac Trucky. That's the kind of semi truck that's flat in front, with the engine under the cab. The type with the engine in front like normal cars is called Peterbuilt.

Personally, I've always thought it had something to do with that cat necklace she has. And with this kind of reporting, the reporter usually wears a camera mounted in a helmet, adds to the protection. Wouldn't it be classic if Eileen got a modeling contract out of this? She already has the high maintenance part down.

LOL that's why I'm here. Dude next chapter. Scoops following Caelum around and giant Eileen grabs both of them by mistake. Scoops, Caelum and camera straight down Eileen's shirt.

Yeah but Violet's pregnancy is a bit more normal than Becky's. So it's going to take a while. Maybe a few scenes with Tobey having to live with the effects of Pregnancy and finding out the hard way exactly what those are.

As for ideas, here's a though. To a certain extent, Alphamumeric has to rebuild their reputation. So what if they decide to let a news reporter take a camera and they take him along on patrol one day. This could be a way for Scoops to redeem himself and for Wordgirl to give Scoops a chance, cause that really wasn't his fault.

But of course a day in the life of Team Alphanumeric is anything but ordinary. Scoops pretty much gets dragged along for the ride of his life. There are a ton of possabilties for this. The right, Huntress, Eileen. The possabilities are endless.

And as for the rest of the season, why not focus on Tobey a bit. What his life is like, especially going through the process of setting up your own company. I mean the paperwork and hassle alone would be mind numbing.
But then add in the fact that Mr. Big doesn't like the idea of competition. He starts messing with Tobey in a big way. But Tobey doesn't want to bother Wordgirl with this, because she has troubles of her own. So he decides to handle it himself. So Tobey has to juggle, starting a couple, tending to his pregnant girlfriend and holding off Mr. Big. Frankly, this could either bring Tobey to a new level, or drive him straight out of his mind.

Pretty good chapter. Although two little nit picks. First, this is the person he loves, when Tobey found them, he wouldn't have bothered waiting for back up, he would have crashed his way in. Wordgirl and Math Whiz would have had a harder time restraining him than freeing Violet.

And second, who leaves an entire skyscraper sitting around empty?

Hee, and with a kid involved, no less. That could have gotten akward.

Great story. Also Toby could make violet a frame that projects forcefeilds, since it looks like she's going to get dragged into the fighting.

Oh man, Violet getting kidnapped? I don't even want to imagine the rampage Tobey will unleash to get her back. And you should take it a bit easier with Scoops. I mean I know he gets a one track mind, but he's not stupid.