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First off, epic battle. Caelum sounds like he's just getting frustrated, but I'm sure Emma can help him through it. You know there are plenty of other towns in this world. Maybe what Caelum and Emma really need is a change of scenery?

Who knows, perhaps there's a town out there where X and X3 could make their own mark. Right now people see them as copies of Math Whiz and Wordgirl, they need a place where they can stretch their wings and make their own mark. Withing visiting distance, of course. But I think it's time for them to find their own names. X and X3 are kind of generic and people just see them as a sort of Wordgirl and Math Whiz 2.0 They need to make an identity of their own.

But of course that'll have to wait. Zaniah isn't done just yet. There's still an epic space battle to deal with. And don't forget, back on Decimal Huggy is a famous pilot. I know it's been a while, but maybe he still has one good dog fight left in him?

That does bring up a point. What the heck is Violet going to do with Arianna? She can't just leave a newborn alone in Tobey's lab.

No, I mean that Violet just left a newborn baby alone in science lab to go off and fight in a war suit. I know Violet can get a bit distracted sometimes, but you really think she'd do that? I'm just saying that maybe Violet would have thought to leave the baby somewhere safe first, like with Tobey's mom?

Ooh, this is getting good, like that quiet moment before the thunderstorm.

Intersting idea. I was just going to have it be battle armor with Wordgirl's color scheme. But actually having the battle suit look like Worgirl, that is a nice touch. I had an idea of Tracie more wanting to show up Wordgirl than just get in on the action, but that works.

One thing though, Zaniah's universe is a darker place. In that universe it wouldn't be a heart of knowledge, maybe a heart of chaos? Ooh, are we buidling up to powered up Becky facing off against powered up Zaniah? I see Becky wanting to handle the empress personally. Zaniah is a bad reminder of what Becky herself could have been and I wouldn't be surprise if Becky takes it personally.

Good start so far. Though, now that I think about it, it might have been a good idea to give the girl a bit more of personality than just a young girl, or at the very least a name. Not sure what though.

Right now after everthing that's happened, I think Becky and Tim need to just take some time, relax and focus on being a family with Carina. Plus Violet and Tobey are starting a family of their own. You think Violet would move in with Tobey?

Anyway I have some possible ideas, but I don't want to make a gigantic review. I'll get into details in an email.

I like the idea of keeping Becky and Tim's ceremony simple. It's a calm moment before the coming chaos of the public ceremony. God the guest list for that thing is going to be a mile long.

I know the song in chapter 100. Self Proof is Invincible. I just don't know which band plays it.

Finally made it to chapter 141, my god i hope this isn't the end cause this was just the best thing since sliced bread. What happened to Carina helping out the team? I think The Butcher and Chuck the Evil Sandwhich making Guy should join the team or at least be reserve members like tobey. I always wondered if The Butcher could create food without stopping couldn't he go to starving countries and give food?