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November 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good, your characterizations were spot on.
Your dialog didn't suck, (ie, it was in characterization)
The sex was kind of brief and rushed, but what the Hell.
Very good story
Your dialog didn't suck, (ie, it was in characterization)
The sex was kind of brief and rushed, but what the Hell.
Very good story
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July 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story, picturing daria in a candy-stripers uniform is classic. all we need was Jane making jokes about her. all in all, it was great. 5 stars