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Continue it! It is not screwed up damn you! I wanna know what happenes! You can NOT just throw something like this out there and not finish it! Take some time off if yu need to, but please don't leave us with THAT as a cliff hanger. The nightmares, OHHH the NIGHTMARES!!!!!

By the way I love you and I think the previous chapter was awsome as usual...just thought I should put some nice compliments in here...

I think you should continue this one. I didn't see any point at which you messed up... And it's very good so far. :0

Noooooooooo! Don't start a new one Zim! I know you think that you screwed up but you haven't and if you think it's because of how long your story is then don't worry because I've read fanfics that have almost sixty chapters in the whole thing that are'nt even finished. If you want to start a new one then you can do a revision of your story after you finish it. Remember it's never good to start something and never finish it. I would be so sad if you started a new story, I like this one : (

Hmm, as for starting over or not, well, I don't really mind either way. If you think that a new story would be time better spent, then by all means. After coming this far (congrats!) I can understand that you'd be a little hesitent to just drop it. In all honesty, the story does seem a little confused. Dib in particular acts pretty random at times. But your writing style has improved greatly since you started, and so has your grasp of the characters, I'd bet. Starting anew might be a good idea. Don't think, though, that you've in any way failed with this fic; you were just sharpening your skillz. Although if your authors notes were any indication, you've written a lot of this late at night. A great time for coming up with ideas, but not a good time to post, since I, for one, tend to miss a lot of error in my writing and story elements. Well, no matter what you decide, I'll read it. Good luck!

-Masks

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

I hardly ever get to say that, so I'm happy x3

Awsomness! I liked how Gir interupted.

Gah, poor Zim. He's getting so frustrated, isn't he? ^^; I like how you used the Irken gender thing in this chapter. Pretty creative. :0

Hope you're able to update soon! Oh, and happy birthday to Sarah! ^^

Awww that must seriously suck Zim, hope you get a new one soon. Oh and just to give you a bit of good news I'm not sick anymore (jumping for joy) and that I can now get back to reviewing your story without anything distracting me.

Zim has quite alot of insecurities. Really a side of him rarely ever seen.

Chapter 24 was particularly lovely. I always love conflict between Zim and Dib, especially in ZADR fics like this. And Zim's affectionate behavior is still so cute! It makes me giggle. >w< Update soon, yes? :0

Way to go Zim! 25 chapters and I gotta say that this chapter has probably got to be your best one yet. The way you put such passion between Dib and Zim in this chapter sent shivers down my spine. And don't worry about nobody reviewing your story anymore, they probably think that you're still on that vacation you were talking about. Keep up the awesome work, your faithful reviewer and reader Jordan : )