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for Zim against the world

by Darkplaygirl

person Silver Rose Fox
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like how the story is going.
And I do have some questions....
1.If Zim is growing near the height of the Tallest then is he going to be
taller then Dib?
2.Does Dibby have a crush on Zim?
3.Does Zim know what Dib is doing to him?
I guess that all the question I have for now.
Keep this wonderful story going!
schedule July 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My heart was beating really fast while I read this, I literaly screamed when Dib didn't cut him open. I cant believe he was only joking *grumble* Give me a heart atack why dontcha.
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You provide all the right ingredients for an enjoyable read. I cant help but fantasize about what may happen next.
person ZimDOOM
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review. Thought I would return the favor. I like what I have read so far, and if that isn't motivation enough, how about this: MORE! MORE!! MORE!!! MORE!!!! MORE!!!!! Definately different from what I've read before, having both characters been more or less 'nice' to each other for once. Hope it lasts, most stories I read have them fighting each other or or have SM in them. Big turn off for me, SM, but it's up to you to write the story, not me. Leprechauns!
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh god please continue i always thought that zim would be the dominat one in a relationship with dib ut this is alot better



long live the irken empier
person Whitethorn
schedule June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Great beginning. I hope to see more of it, soon. :)