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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have now read all 19 chapters so far and i just gotta say i really love it, im glad that your taking your time with the smut, it fits better then just rushing right into it, considering Zim has no idea what sex is, but the kissing is really hot, and i like how it comes out of the blue. and now Zim has started to accept his feelings for Dib. also he wants to help take over IRK, thats big. very very good story so far, i hope you update soon
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July 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
so awesome!
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about it Zim, it leaves us readers in suspense so there's nothing wrong with it. As for ideas, in the Invader Zim episode "Backseat Drivers from Beyond the Stars" Zim gets remote control of the massive (as well as Dib with Tak's ship) with blueprints or schematics from a Vortian prisoner who designed the Massive ( he's called Prisoner Number 777). Maybe while Zim is brainstorming on how to conqure Irk he can remember the time he controlled the Massive and then tell Dib about it and Dib will remember and then Zim will also tell him about The Vortian Prisoner and then they can call him and get some help, like weapons and stuff. PS, if you want I can email you this episode but it's been cut so you'll get three emails instead of one. Hope this helps : )
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG I LUV UR STORYS!!!! Please hurry with the next Zim one!!!! I LOVE ZIM!!! I love him so... I don't really have any ideas for the next story plot thingymado. But never the less, WRITE, WRITE, WRITE!!! Thank you sooo much!
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July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think that I say this for all of your three most faithful reviewers when I say that it's an honor that you dedicated a chapter of this great story for us. This story rocks!!!
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Congrats Zim, that was an awesome chapter. You shouldn't call it your first reasonable chapter though, cause it doesn't matter if the chapter's reasonable or not, the important thing is that it follows the storyline and that it adds to the mood of the story. Oh and can I have your email address, I want to show you a fanfic I found that should put all your worries about your story not being good or good enough to rest :)
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As usual I feel all warm and fuzzy...well except when Zim left with those guys...then I just felt anxiety, but now we're back to teh warm and fuzzy feeling!
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, so he's going to help now! YAY! I see much sinister plotting in the future.>3
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By the darkness! I was THIS close to th3 screen reading through the touchy feely molesting part. I guess I can let out a sigh of relief now, but I'm worried about them getting home. You sure know how to put a gal on edge. I dont think I'll sleep tonight. ^______^zzzzZZZZZZ
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have news that's almost as awesome as your story Zim. I went to see the doctor yesterday and he said that I just have a virus that should only last maybe six days to say the least. He gave me some meds and it's working out greatly because I've been able to eat all my meals and i'm not sore anymore. Sorry about the whole not seeing the doctor thing :(