Outtakes

So, I haven't written anything for about five years and now I'm all grown up (lol!) and try to write something again.
This is not only my first fanfic since (feels like) ever, but the very first fanfic with sexual content. I know, that I'm not good, but we all have started sometime, ne? :P


[...]

"Ah, Zuko", groaned the Fire Lord as his son touches him softly.
The young firebender grinned a little bit and whispered: "And here? How do you feel... here?" - "Ah... that's just right. Do it... a little bit harder... please", sighed Ozai and leaned back.

"It's very amusing to see you so obedient, father", the boy chuckled and placed a kiss on his fathers hip. "Do you know that I ever wanted to see you begging-"

"Oh please, would you shut up?!"

Ozai looked down to his son who was kneeing down before him.
"Do you ever talk so much while having sex with any other person?"
Zuko snorted a little bit displeased and grabbed his fathers manhood. "It's not sex, okay? We're still at the foreplay!"

His grip wasn't very gentle, but Ozai gasped anyway, which made Zuko believe that his father was a little bit of a masochist.
"And I only have sex with you, so there's no comparison..."
Sighing, Ozai palmed Zukos hair. "Just go on, will you?"

Zuko smirked and kept on with caressing his father's erection. He gently licked over the glans, making Ozai shivering.
"I haven't tasted you in three years... but you're still the same", Zuko whispered before he continued.

Ozai looked at his only son and remembered the three years without him. It was really hard to endure since the only way for sexual intercourse was Azula and this woman's a real bitch, in body and soul.
As Zuko tried his best to please him, Ozai became a little bit impatient since what he really wanted, was Zukos tight little ass.

"Zuko", he sighed and grabbed his sons head. "Enough with the child's play... you know what I want now." The young prince shuddered a bit, but nodded anyway. "I also can't wait anymore."

In one fell swoop, Ozai pushed Zuko down on the mattress and kissed him hard and ruthless. Without giving Zuko a moment to breathe, the Firelord shoved his tounge into Zukos mouth.

As soon as they broke the impulsive kiss, Ozai spread Zukos legs and grinned at what he saw down there. "My my, you really can't wait, hm?"
Zuko's cheeks turned deep red while his father stroke above his aroused manhood. "Don't... don't tease me!"

"Don't you like it anymore?"

"Aah~"

What made Zuko gasping was one of Ozais fingers inside of him. He knew that his father wasn't very tentative at this part, but it was like his first time because Zuko hadn't felt this for years. "Not so rough", he begged quietly, but Ozai didn't listen to him inserting another finger into Zuko.

When Zukos gasps were not longer filled with sorrow but lust, Ozai licked over his own lips. "Finally...", was the only word which came over his lips before he rammed himself rudely into his sons ass. "AAAHH!"

Without the help of any lube, like always, Ozai forced his own erection deeper into Zuko, completely ignoring all the whining and groaning.

[...]


It's still WIP, because I don't know if I should write more of it. So I just wanted to present it and see if I get any feedback.

~ gracialmind