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The Fan

By: JAAg18
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Rating: Adult ++
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Disclaimer: I do not own PowerPuff Girls, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Chapter 2

A/N: First I'd like to thank everyone for the reviews. At first I didn't think how people would feel about a dark Powerpuff Girls fic then I saw how much everyone loved Immortality Syndrome (which is a very good fic. you should check it out. Kudos Parsec). So here's another chapter!




Never before have I felt so alive. It's like all my senses have been increased ten fold. The world seems so different, like I'm more in tune with it. I did exactly what Him told me to. He said that I should practice homing my new skills. He gave me a simple mission. Send the Powerpuff Girls a message.

So I've been waitin thn this house amongst the suburbs of Townsville. It's quiet. Of course it wasn't quiet half an hour ago, oh no! I had quite the reception. I didn't mean to kill them. Just sort of happened. I couldn't let them warn my true prey so I took...action. First the hubby. A simple claw to the throat was more than enough to finish him. Yes, I know that slashing throats is a bit cliche `but it's my first time! The wife had never heard a thing. No, she was upstairs in the bedroom. Now SHE was fun! I got to be a bit more creative with her, yes. We had a most memorable experience. I feel that I really got to unleash some of my creativity with her.

When that car drove up I'm sure my eyes lit up. The girls, my girls! They were in the car waving good-bye to my prey who was approaching. Soon they would minut uut until then I'd have to satisfy myself with their friends. Speaking of friend, I can hear her coming into to the house. Better greet her.


She steps into the house, not once suspecting that anything is wrong. Such is the naivety of youth. She (Susy I think her name is) came running up the stairs, calling for her mother. Susy could call all she wanted, no one was coming for her. No one except me. Susy didn't take her parents absence with much consideration, it was Friday night after all. It was amazing. I was walking right behind her and she had no idea I was there. I followed her down the hall where she froze, seeing my reflection in the window...........

Here we are in Susy's bedroom. You know she's really a beautiful young girl with her long auburn hair, pink skin, and big tear-filled eyes. Her flesh was soft to the touch, and she tasted like watermelons. Susy is a shy girl. She whimpers when I rip her clothes to shreds, cringes when I touch her. I tell her not to be scared, that I won't hurt her. I'm true to my words. I kiss and caress her like she deserves to be. I fill her with myself and she yelps but it's expected. It's her first time after all. I make sure that I go at a nice and slow pace, not too hard. Don't want to hurt her. She sobs, but she can't fool me. I can feel her inner walls constrict, closing in on my arousal and pushing me over the edge of ecstasy. She shudders beneath me, succumbto hto her own orgasm. I collapse on top of her, running my fingers through her hair. She's no Powerpuff Girl but she satisfied me.

ARGH!! Why is she doing this!? I was gentle, kind, and she repays me with this awful wail! She's curling into a ball and trembling! What for!? I'm kind enough to not hurt her and this is how she repays me!! With one hand I throw her across the room and into a wall. Now she isn't sobbing. She's screaming! It's like nails on a chalkboard! In an instant I'm towering over her, using the power granted to me to make my body change. I raise my newly formed claws in the air, the light from the moon casting my shadow over her so her face is hidden. I don't need to see her face. I know she's scared. Her scream reaches a new deafening pitch. Be quiet! Shut up! SHUT UP! SHUT UP! YOU STUPID BITCH!! STOP CRYING!! STOP IT!! STOP IT!! STOP!!!!!!!!

It's quiet now. Sweet, blissful silence. That was way too much noise. one one is bound to have heard it! I must finish what I was sent here to do! I gather up the deceased parents and place them next to what's left of their daughter. It's really a shame I had to do that to her young body, but she just wouldn't be quiet. I pick up one of Susy's arms and use the severed limb like a paintbrush, writing my message onto the wall. Finished I take a step back to admire my handy work. Not bad for my first time. I toss the bloody limb on the heap of bodies headhead towards the window, taking one last look at my work of art. There's no turning back now. I make my exit as vanish into the shadows, ignoring the blaring sirens of police cars.

A/N: The following scene was for mature audiences and shouldn't have been viewed by the faint at heart. ^_^ Now kindly Review.





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