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January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love how well this story is written. The growing attraction between Brooklyn and Roberto is very believable, you turn them into real people instead of just characters. I found this story the other day and keep thinking about instonstop. I cannot wait to find out what else happens, I hope that you update soon. I am a little worried though, considering that the name of the fic is Never Meant to Be. I really want Brooklyn and Roberto to be together, and I am a bit giddy thinking about what will happen when Roberto learns that Brody and Brooklyn are one and the same. Anyhoo, great story, I love it so much! I may do some fanart for it and send it to you. Please update soon!
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You must continue this. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat, still. I really want to know how Brook deals with his cutie, and everything else. *chews nails* they get together in the end, right??
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December 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story and I hope you update soon.
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December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ACK!!!! 3 chapters at once, then ACK!!! Oh man, way to build the suspence, the BOOM! End of chapter, lol. The scenes between Brody/Brook and Roberto, dang, didn't know kissing could be described so well, nice job ^_^ Glad to see you had updated, this going wonderfully ^^ Can't wait to read the future chapters :)
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September 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! Another update to read ^_^ Getting good, I can't wait to see Roberto'actiaction when he finds out Brody and Brooklyn are the same, lol. ^_^
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September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to read more of your story on this sight. I followed this all the way from Fanfiction.net and I will continue to cheack out this story. I specially like the small changes you made. Made it a lot easer to follow whats happening. You character develupment is also very good. Any way another thing I like about you story being here is that you can get more discriptev with the lemon scene. hopefully Brooklyn and Roberto will get their moment soon.
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September 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wheeeeeeeee!!! Another chapter ^_^ I'm lg thg this very very much. Especially Brooklyn as a 'Knight (Night) in Shining Armour' lol. Hm, and Roberto's good looks and maism ism do to some mystical (fae?) reason? Get's deeper as we go. Great work, keep it up and I'll keeo faithfully reading ^_^
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September 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I appreciate the email notice you sent. Another great chapter, I love how you are setting thinp, ap, and not just rushing into a relationship between them. I may like a PWP as much as the next person, but I prefer a real story. This is great, I hope to read more soon ^_^
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September 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Absolutely love it! The story is coming along so nicely. :D I like what you're doing with Brooklyn. He's so...innocent.
CORRUPT HIM! *Cackles madly*
CORRUPT HIM! *Cackles madly*
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August 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I so glad youre posting your story here! This way more people can read it and if you decide to get discriptive with Brooklyn and Roberto, which I hope you do, you woun't be breaking any rule! Just keep posting chapters even if you don't get many reweivs at first. You'll soon be noticed as a very good writer.