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Wow.  This is a really dark version of Jazz. Psychopathic, even.  

You did a good job of building it up, with her detachment and apathy from the beginning.  It's nice to see Danny not just fall into Jazz's arms, as well.  

I wonder when (if?) Jazz will find out about Danny Phantom and what her reaction would be.  Would she attempt to use it against Danny... or would she replicate the accident to become like him and then use that to get closer to him?  

There are some nice leads for further chapters.  Hopefully, they're coming?

Thanks for writing and sharing!