rate_review Reviews

The story was cute, but needed some more development.  It's not really clear why Vi just gives into Dash.  As it is, it feels a bit rushed - though that might be apropos for Dash..

Dash's understanding of sexuality looks like something that will get him into more trouble in the future, too.  

Thanks for writing and sharing.

I really enjoyed it and since they had so much creampie sex I think Violet ends up pregnant would love to have a chapter 2