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for Field Trip

by Lennox

schedule July 28, 2022 at 12:00 AM

This was fun. I especially enjoyed the image of the rod stuck up inside Lisa under her dress, with her panties holding it in place. There were a few minor language issues ("the bludge in his pajama pants"), but nothing that really took me out of the story. And the last line made me laugh.