This is a very sensual story that nicely bridges the gaps in Eduardo and Kylie's relationship which have previously been filled only by inference. Their ever increasing knowledge and understanding of each other's sexual and emotional needs make perfect sense and complement each other well. There are some particularly interesting details about oral and digital stimulation, which we have not seen before with these two in so much detail.
The inclusion of Pagan in the first chapter does a great deal to ground this story not only in a realistic world for those of us who have shared our lives with cats, but also very definitely in the world of Extreme Ghostbusters and Kylie's loft apartment in particular. Despite his infrequent appearances on the show, anyone who knows anything about cats must realise that Pagan always plays a huge part in Kylie's everyday life, whether there is any sex going on or not.