Very nice though yeah, most of the characters on the show don't have a last name, so there's that. Other than that, great work. Also to answer your question from the previous chapter on whether to add Andy and Ollie into the mix, I guess they should be added because why not. Can't have the fun without them involved.
Interesting to have back-to-back SFW chapters, especially in incorporating Alex into Gene's love life. Quite a nice read before getting ready for the hot and sexy stuff.
Also to answer which show I would suggest to you if you're planning on doing another story, I could recommend you doing The Great North if you're for that.
Nice to add Millie into the mix, especially in light of this week's episode. As for whether Gene would be with either Courtney or Alex, that's pretty much a coin flip since either one would be great material imo for him. Again, a flip of a coin. As for suggestions from moi, it could possibly comes down to either...
A) Darryl and Rosa having some "fun" when enjoying their date, possibly playing some video games at their respective houses.
B) Louise having a sleepover with Jessica, Kaylee, and Millie and would result in them having some lesbian action, hopefully some sex toys are involved.
C) Tina and Susmita doing some bonding as friends by masturbating to each other and turn it into some hot action between them in Tina's room.
Either one would work fine for you. But other than that, keep up the good work. There's not a lot of Bob's Burgers smut fics and glad that you and JamesRyder are doing in this site. So keep it up :D
Incredible work you did with the Darryl and Rosa chapter! It's amazing to have some continutiy from the second chapter with them and it was quite an enjoyable read! n.n
Louise is a very naughty girl
Was wondering when Tina was going to get to do something in this story. Finally nice that she's getting her due. Nice.
Even though this chapter wasn't very long I enjoyed it
Very nice work on keeping this story going. Also didn't noticed that suggestions was a thing lol. Should be fun reading and maybe send one in the future.
I love that Louise had some with Gene & Rudy maybe it can be a threesome next time
Despite the somewhat poor grammar on this story, no offense on that, it's an interesting read. Especially the Darryl portion of the chapter with Rosa. So keep it up!