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for My Wish Is Your Command

by GeorgeGlass

person Nytefyre
schedule December 4, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Wow... the depravity of Bart.  The epilogue goes someway towards washing out the sadism, but also shows in the very end just how fully power corrupts.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

person Yahegai
schedule June 11, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Lisa turning the tables on Bart was unexpected but if anyone can do it, it would be Lisa always. Great job with this story!

person Anonymous
schedule August 26, 2021 at 12:00 AM

thought it was good overall but the ending ruins it, it's just incredibly lame in every imaginable way, I'd suggest either tossing the last chapter out and replace it with a better ending

person King
schedule August 24, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Im going to head cannon and say that Lisa wish brought her to a alternate universe where she was in charge and left a copy of her behind.

person Anonymous
schedule August 23, 2021 at 12:00 AM

A 10 as usual.

I'm curious about what being "on the treadmill" means here though. I'm guessing it's not really supposed to be answered, but I'd still like to know...

person Unverlorkelistrel
schedule August 22, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Nice twist ending!

I enjoyed the story as a whole, Bart the God-King, but having Lisa find the lamp was an amusing ending. Poetic.

person Toonspew
schedule August 17, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Hey George, still enjoying this series and looking forward to more chapters.

Now that Bart has been breeding Springfield and we are seeing the first generation of his daughters reaching fuckable ages, it would be great to meet the offspring of some recognizable Simpsons characters. Bart promised he'd breed Jessica during her chapter, and of course Lisa and Maggie are tempting targets since he's threatened them with inbreeding so often. But we could also see the results of Bart having his way with Majula, Ruth Powers and her daughter, maybe Mindy from the Power Plant, who knows. I leave it up to your imagination!

schedule July 30, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I continue to love everything you do with this story. I somehow missed two chapters that got posted and had to catch up. 

person Toonspew
schedule June 29, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Just wanted to say that I'm really enjoying this story, and the misogynistic slant you've put on the nigh-omnipotent Bart. I'm only sorry that the story is already past the point of canon ages, since 8-year old Lisa is the version we all love best.

Would love to see Bart have some fun with some of the one-off female characters from the school (besides Sherri & Terri). Nikki McKenna, Jessica Lovejoy, Allison Taylor, Gina Vendetti, Mary Spuckler, ect.

schedule June 24, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I am loving this one. You have a great writing style and a hot story going. Keep it up.