Sooo excited for the next chapter. It looks like it's going to be Miss Johnson, who I was seriously hoping you'd do. She presents such a delicious, erotic narrative opportunity. God I hope our kiddo impregnates that sexy pent-up fox, that womb of hers is just begging for a cute little white haired baby to be put inside it, and the idea of it being her own young student knocking her up is MADDENINGLY hot. I've always thought Agnes is legitimately one of the low key sexiest girls in the cast; her whole thing just does it for me, the done-up teacher's bun with a pencil through it, the stockings, the eyeshadow and, of course, those hips...There's a lot of passion seething within that chaste, frustrated older woman, if you ask me, and I think a chapter where we get to watch the normally mature, responsible Agnes fall for her cute little student's charm and it's all allowed to finally be released promises something very special. I'm really looking forward to it! Sorry about this not being a real review, I'll write one later, I just wanted to say this before anything else!
I know there are rules against commoditizing household sexual activity (apart from every married couple ever), but I think Lucy owes Lana big-time for instigating Lincoln's quickie call.
That was a pretty amazing double-whammy, and the hot super-incest talk and its effects made it powerfully satisfying. (As he ran down the list of sisters I was reminded of an HFPS picture that you probably should not look up.) Heh, Lincoln probably never expected that getting it off his chest would lead to Lucy revealing the pregnancy-craving beast within herself.
Speaking of impregnation though, Lincoln knows the deal with his sisters, but he hasn't pondered about Girl Jordan's fecundity or the small-but-non-zero risk with Stella. Oops…
In the end it was very sweet that he made known his appreciation in all the ways Lucy made him feel better. He couldn't ask for a better confidant. (And down the street Clyde just screamed out in unknown anguish.)
BTW was it supposed to be, "his scent and body heat"? However, “I love that about you,” was purely fantastic. Thanks for an extra-intense bit of incestuous fun and love.
(Chapter 4)
“…near the rear doors.” Mmm! That's good foreshadowing. :)
The set-up for Stella in the last chapter and a little, eh, deeper exploration at the beginning here made the payoff even more exciting. Along with the lovely action their sauciness in getting to it was fast & hot… and it's interesting how that thought occasionally pops up here and there (only to be dismissed once something better pops up).
It's really sweet how Stella is as concerned about remaining friends with Lincoln despite her powerful lust for him. That feels like a very natural thing for a 'tween. Now it'll be interesting to see if she can keep from letting anything slip about her new extracurricular activities – especially from Lincoln's other FWB. (And if she and Jordan ever did realize they were sharing him, would their reactions be different whether or not Lincoln was present at the time?)
Lovely and fun chapter, and the title for the next one is rather intriguing too. Thank you for more very Loud fun.
YES RITA IS PREGGERS! I wonder if her sex drive is higher when she is preggers!?
On other note....I really want to see lincoln x Agnes Johnson, maybe lincoln is her last chance of concieving?
Plus having agnes in his pocket opens the door for lincoln to have a threesome with agnes and stella or jordan.
This was entertaining. I don't hope for you to do this (because you must be busy doing your own things), but could you please show us this "girl time" that Rita has with two (or more) of her older daughters?
Really looking forward to the next chapter
(Chapter 3)
Beautiful job making Lincoln's ultimate wish come true, and in such hard-pounding style. Though I do worry about his guilt even more after such an emotionally charged time with The Supreme Sexual Being in his life. BTW Lisa was cute with her self-control seemingly breaking down her logical mind a bit. Nicely done. Whatever (and whoever) comes next should be quite interesting. Thanks.
And the kinks continue! Good chapter.
oh hell yes! i hope Lincoln knocks up all his sisters! hope they have the money for one more baby
welp one non-loud girl a bunch to go! do darcie next!