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for Sluts of Amity Park

by Shotahunter1851

person Alfonso
schedule January 25, 2022 at 12:00 AM
person Alfonso me gusta muchísimo tu fic y lado ir nigh como reuniónes sinceras espero más d e ti en reuniones cinseras me gustaría que Danny se case con jazz's y Maddie le propone a volar cuando ellos vean los monitores la petición de Danny a jazz y Maddie
schedule January 25, 2022 at 12:00 AM
person Pyro
schedule November 17, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Really liked that last chapter even tought i don't like tucker that much but it was a good plot to bring in myny different smaller storys. If you want to expand on that you could make a chapter like 'Paulinas blackmail dairy' or ' Vlads R- rated spy folder

Bonus points from me for the lipstick and tally marks now there is only danny possesing a throphy collection of his conquests used pantys. That could also be made into a mini flashbag collection

I would really love to see Danny finding out how the woman in his life are huge sluts and becomes sort of their handler/wingman/manager because he gets horny from them being sluts.

Also ironic Kinks are always graet to read. Sam whoring for money enen tough she rich,Maddie getting horny from ghost dong. Jazz going clubbing and being a bad girl even though shes a muster student. the popular girls sleeping with the unpopular because they are far aot of their legue and no one would believe them when they told someone. the super tuff Valerie love being dominated. the proud stuck up Pamela loves to be humiliated.

Also incest, is that a yay or nay.

Keep up the good work

sorry for the terrible english, not my first languade

also am the same guy who made the rewiew waaaay back from chapter 2

person elaninomo
schedule October 5, 2021 at 12:00 AM

what a great chapter, i love it than you tease the act instead of just doing it straight of the gate, makes it hotter, thanks for the shota maddie chapter, hope to see more of your stories, keep the good work. The world needs more milf x shota

person Guest
schedule June 14, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Nice chapter, but I think this one belongs to Lady of the night. 

person AN
schedule May 31, 2021 at 12:00 AM

So... During Boxed Up Fury, we actually meet an Ghost Centaur while Danny is looking for Pandora at her palace. 

Could you do something between the two of them during this episode, Danny and the Centaur. Straight, yuri or yaoi, it's all up to you.

And while I know that this is out there, can you also do an Arachne/Spidertaur/Drider thing with Danny during that episode, too?

person AN
schedule May 26, 2021 at 12:00 AM

 

Can you please write something where Jack and Dash are given or grow manboobs, mantits, otherwise known as moobs? Whether or not they lactate is completely up to you.

Thanks

person AN
schedule May 26, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Can you make an Sam Manson, Paulina Sanchaz and Valerie Gray lesbian story, where all three of them are in an polyamorous relationship with one another?

person Guest
schedule May 7, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Here is an suggestion: Have the DP girls have sex with the ghost animals, such as:

Valerie and Cujo

Sam and the Ectopusses

Paulina and the vultures

Sam and Wulf

And so on and etc. 

person Guest
schedule May 6, 2021 at 12:00 AM

During Reality Trip, can you have Danny and Sam swap clothes, the clothes they wore to escape from the GIW, Dash’s football outfit and Paulina’s Cheerleader uniform and have them have sex while dressed like that? Sam in Dash’s clothes and Danny in Paulina’s? Sam the jock and Danny the Cheerleader?

 

Oh, Oh, can I request an MTF Danny and an FTM Sam romantic story where the two cross-dress and love it and each other and make love like that?