Neat and sweet story, Lincoln's sisters sought to teach him a lesson but it backfired hard on them
this is why i have you recommended.
you can write a story that has zero sex and do it well...
i hope my stories can be like yours eventually.
the two non sexual stories i've written have less views than my sexual ones.
i know it's weird to say but i respect the hell out of ya.
Not what i thoughtit was going to happen, but still a good funny story. Can't wait for the next story that's coming, Any chance of Sam and Luna with Lincoln in a story? Or Lori and Carol with Lincoln? Just a coupleof ideas.
Thank you and keep up the great work, Merry Christmas
LOL! That was not where I thought that was going. Excellent work!
This was a great alternate ending to the episode, even if not full-on erotic action. (You spoil us with the Loudcest!) The descriptions of the girls in just their underwear made for some gorgeous mental images, and I love the idea that they all came around to Lincoln's way of thinking after actually trying it; Lola's final word on the subject was perfect. Special kudos for both Lucy's sans-outerwear ensemble and her comment about what she wanted to see Lincoln wearing.
Though you describe his distraction so well that one has to wonder how he makes it through the school day. Anyway, I also really liked the titles and authors' names throughout. While at one point I'd have expected Rita to make the kids retrieve the groceries in their underwear as punishment, perhaps it was better not to (further?) attract the attention of Child Welfare… but Lori and Leni really would have made Mr. Grouse's day.
It certainly made mine. Thanks for another fun tale.