This was a good chapter. I really did not expect for this turn of events. I did not expect for you to follow the pregnant route, even less of Danny accepting the baby so readily or revealing it to his parents. It was nice. Neither I was expecting of adding Jazz on the action (I know that some of your other stories do, but I though that this one was going through another path). All seems nice. Very well witen.
I am sorry to do ask for a request (because it is something that fans shouldn't be doing and because it appears that next chapter is the last chapter for this story (or that is what AO3 is showing with the 11/12 chapters)), but if you make a foursome for the next chapter (Desiree, Penlope, Dora and Danny), could you make Dora and Penelope latching onto Desiree nipples. Meanwhile I love the relationship that you have formed between the girls and Danny, I can not stop myself from thinking that the girls have not bonded further between each other for the circumstances in which they find themselves or initiated any intimate interaction between each other on their own volition.
Ok. It took me a lot of time to return. Hello! It is me. The anon that recommended the BJ. You can not imagine the surprise after reading this chapter. I never expected for you to write what I asked, and you do not know how grateful I was after reading it. Thank you very much. This was .... You have no idea. I loved it and you made a good job in presenting it (even though I was a little annoyed with the flashback. I suppose that I didn't want the image of Sidney with Paulina inside that part. XD )
But you did a pretty good job and I will be eternally grateful.
Also, the plot of the story (because there IS plot). You have done a pretty good job on humanizing Desiree, Dora and Penelope, giving them thoughts and purpose beyond sleeping with Danny. This is pretty good.
[The following is a joke. I repeat, the following is a joke. XD . Do not take seriously]
Now that I feel empowered on convincing you on doing that scene ( XD ), I want to convince you on doing another one ( XD ). Next scene (jazz hands): Desiree plans another surprise for Danny. She asks in advance for some money (more than she has ever asked him). After she gets the money, she goes to prepare the surprise. Later, she asks of him when he would have free an entire day and, after scheduling the time, she gives him an address. That day arrives and Danny goes to the place and enters. There he finds his surprise, a test of endurance. There he find Desiree, Dora and Penelope, plus other seven women for Danny for the entire day (24 hours). He will have an entire day full of boobs, pussy and all the "games" he could imagine. THERE! Desiree will notice that there is something strange with Danny when he achieves on outlasting them and not the other way around..... But, she is not asking or complaining.
[end of the joke here]
*Huff* Sorry. Do not take seriously what I wrote before. Even I know that THAT is not something you ask someone to do (not only because it is too much work, but also because it is a big deviation of your story). I only wanted it out of my system.
Have a good day/week/month/year and hope that all your stories are doing well.
Well, what can I say? Humanized Desiree, Penelope, and Dora. And even though they are whores, they are genuinely falling for Danny, which is Danny at the same age as the show. Wonder what will happen, I really hope the current status quo of the story never gets broken, but with the mention of Sam, sadly its meant to happen. Hope all that drug money won't come back to bite "Danny's ass", I genuinely want for Danny and the girls to have some sort of happy ending.
Really curious Dora isn't taking the pill, she mentions she wants Danny as her sugar daddy, but I wonder if she is trying to get preggers on purpose. (If it was my story I would get the three preggers) . Well cant wait for the next chapter
I dont know if this is on purpose but you seemed to have added the same chapter to this one and to another of your works
Fantastic chapter, very curious to see that Desiree isnt being more protective of Danny. But really looking to more. By far the best thing i've read in a long time and i can't wait for more.
Hello! It's me, the thank you guy. Sorry to bother you, but I wanted to know if for next chapter you could show us a very descriptive and raunchy triple blowjob. I know that it is a very strange request, but it is something that I like. Again, sorry to bother you with this request and thank you for the great story that you have written.
OH MY GOD! Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you.Thank you. This was an incredible surprise. I only expected Dora, but you also included Spectra too. I need to admit that the flow of the four went very well. But also, there is some worries as plot. Danny is becoming very addicted to this, with the previous fantasy happening. Also, there will reach a point where a) the reality of Danny not being rich dropping on the girls, b) Dora not being able to obtain new customers from Danny (unless Sam becomes an option that Dora doesn't mind in getting), c) the funds of Danny drying up.
Well, all in all, it was a good chapter. Thanks again and I know that the next chapter will be as good as this one.
I loved this au so much please write more
Thank you for this two las chapters. They were pretty good. Meanwhile it has smut, it also has a interesting plot. I really hope next chapter apart of Dorathea and Desiree you could include Spectra (I really have a thing between the guy is sandwiched between the women). Or in the future for Sam to end ropped on this and ends smitten with one of the women.