alright really liking this!
Can i be in the story
more please!
This is just a so brilliant idea. Thanks for working this out.
I am loving this story!
The bisexual element is very hot to me. Can't wait to see what happens when other characters enter the story.
I implore you to continue this story! I love perverted versions of the canon story and you're hitting it out of the park with these first 3 chapters. I also love that you go for the bisexual route, something I always enjoy. It annoys me when people write stories with everyone being hypersexual but the dudes manage to avoid making it gay while the girls lez out. The moment Sokka engulfed Aang before Katara had a chance was when I realized this was a story worth following to the end!
Regarding that topic, it gives a sexy extra layer to Zuko now since it's not only about capturing the Avatar for the sake of his honor, but also his boner. Looking forward to all of his sexual frustration going foward.
(I actually made this account just to be able to write this review. Really wanted to make sure you got the praise you deserved!)
Very interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.