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for Enter the Sandboy

by GeorgeGlass

schedule August 25, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Lincoln should have put it inside Lucy

schedule August 24, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Oh boy Lincoln feels like he is in the middle of a land mine field. And Lucy is really cute in a creepy way.

And Lori is next? Is she going to be the one that takes Lincoln's V card?

That said I'm wondering if all the Loud kids are perverts at this point considering their actions so far. It makes sense given that they probably inherited it from their parents. Also are the twins going to double team Lincoln later on?

schedule August 18, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Oh boy Lincoln is going to be internally freaking out for the rest day isn't he?

So anyway what order are the sisters going to take their turns? And who will be the one to take their brother's first time? I'm dying to know.

Also I'm curious as to what other ideas for LH stories you might have in the works. If you're willing to share them.

schedule August 18, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Hey George love your Loud House stories and can't wait for more. So nocturnal naughty dreams huh? yeah i can see that happening.

 

Any chance of Luna getting some time with Lincoln? At least Lucy and Lynn at the same time please? keep up the great work as always.

schedule August 18, 2019 at 12:00 AM

(Chapter 2)

It's good that Lincoln finds it so easy to rationalize away his concerns, whether subconsciously or making himself believe he's doing it subconsciously. Now I have to wonder if Lana and Lola had similar subconscious machinations as well. Either way, it's going to be even more fun now that Lincoln knows that it's for real, even if Lola is quite happy with his nocturnal exploits. To be fair, considering the situation he found himself & Lola in after waking up makes it really hard… to blame him for giving in to temptation.

Even with the sexy fun I get the feeling that there's still more to this mystery: Lola's faceless soldiers could have a deeper meaning (even if Lana's fear was pretty direct), and I'm looking forward to seeing how Girl Jordan fits into Lincoln's problem… or vice versa, I suppose. :) Thanks for another fun one.

schedule August 13, 2019 at 12:00 AM

(Chapter 1)

The story is off to a very fine start, with both the title and the coincidences whetting my intrigue about what may come (besides so many Loud children). Also, I really like how sweet Lincoln was to care for Lana first despite his exhaustion and… uhm, [i]needs[/i], which made even the tease of some sultry action more intense.

Now I was a bit surprised that it was such a short opening chapter, especially for you, yet it still sets up the scene fully and has me hooked. Thanks.

schedule August 9, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Love your work, have read everything you have up so far.  Good start to what I am sure will be a good fic.  Just wish there was a way to see when you update your other works without have to scroll through them all.

schedule August 9, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I really love where this is going what sister will Lincoln be making love to?