This is just fucking fantastic! The louds the way they really should be! Especially Lincoln and Rita! Love it!
So far i have came with every chapter 10/10
Good story, while I would have liked a few dozen more chapters I really enjoyed it.
Please tell me you will make Enter the Sandboy 2
Great scenes and story
I realize this is meant to be the final chapter but if you were to make a oneshot or even sequel (fingers crossed) Could you make it about one now normal day in the house where we see in detail how Lincoln "survives" his family? (maybe a difference between the weekend and a school day, or even a family trip?) Just a thought
Anyway good luck to you and your future stories
How appropriate that Lana should take it in The End for the final chapter. :)
The rain returning after Lincoln has some great guilt-free sex the first time was a nice metaphor too, not least of all for all the wetness in his future. The nicer mood in the morning bathroom line was a sweet touch as well. Nice to know Lola is ready to fully accept her royal scepter, and cool that Lucy would want to roleplay some long-suffering yet very loving wife for him. However the cutest bit of all was Lana's revelation that the intimacy was most-important to her. It makes for a very lovely high note to leave on; knowing that the Loud kids will be having plenty of sexy fun is great too. Now I just wonder if Lincoln will save that tidbit about Luan's collection to use when he needs an edge on her... or even suggest they go through it together.
BTW Knowing your love for Phineas and Ferb I had no doubt who the zebra was. Heh, the whole thing started with "hose" and "pipe" issues and that turns out to be the solution too.
Thanks for another fantastically fun and sexy tale.
Looks like thing are Cumming Full Circle!
Ah, so the truth is that Rita and Lynn Sr. are super carriers of the freak gene, though now I must wonder if all of the kids really did inherit the trait or if the pair was just so horny that they had to get their kids into it too. Maybe that doesn't matter because everyone in the Loud House is happy now either way. Glad to hear that Dad gets to enjoy the family pastime... thought I kind-of expected that to be the reveal for the final chapter, so now I'm wondering what last trick you have up your sleeve.
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Oddly enough Rita's behavior in this chapter fits in very well with my personal (and apparently completely unique) opinion that Rita Loud is a bad mother, so she's more in-character here than most would think. After all, she got Lincoln all revved up to the point where no boy could stop before mentioning the possibility of pregnancy – which she didn't have to lay on him at all – just to amp up the wrongness of it all so she'd have a better orgasm.; Yet if she did get pregnant by him there's no need – or even easy way – for Lincoln to know it was his. That's too much to lay on a boy, never mind that if she didn't just let everyone, including all the kids, think it was Lynn Senior's then that's a terrible risk to the future of any such baby. (Of course she could actually just have been lying, but Lincoln will probably still have a panic attack or two once he has enough blood in his upper head to ponder the possibility.)
(…or maybe I'm just reading way too much into it. :) )
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Anyway, story-wise it's a lot more fun to know that it's a house full of horndogs where the fun will never stop. Heck, if anything, the final chapter will probably make it even more awesome. Thanks.
What a bunch of freaky fun.
The pregnancy risk definitely ups the thrill, especially to the baser instincts.
It is weird, but I always feel like adding the father is a step too far, at least in these kind of harem-esque family stories, though in general daddy/daughter is good as a focus for other plots. Latent subconscious Oedipus issue of mine I guess.
Though I am curious just how many V-cards Lincoln claimed, since Lori got his. I have to imagine Lynn Sr. snagged a few? And now the race is on for Lucy, the Twins, and Lily (Lisa was as precocious as ever, lol).
This seems like a nice lead in for the karmakaze picture set where an older Lincoln is "servicing" all his siblings, and a few other girls, and Ronnie Ann asks how he is able to keep up. The last image is of Rita complaining that his stamina is too low if he can only last 10 rounds. What a slave driver!
Fairy-Slayer is right, Rita is a bad mom. A very naughty mommy, who needs some "punishment" in fact.
(And if we are lucky enough to get an Epilogue maybe some Father/Son bonding, just to cover all the bases, is in order? If lesbian play is fine then why not? After all, what's good for the goose is good for the gander!)
Lucy really needs to get her turn