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for Opening the gates to Arendelle

by ItwasMerlin

schedule June 8, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Actually I'll just type the two dark ideas, I was thinking that there could be some breath play aka erotic asphyxiation on Elsa and Anna if she's in the story and the other idea is BDSM if my idea upset anyone including the author sorry

schedule June 7, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I can't wait to see how he gets Elsa to make his fantasy come true, will he slowly ease her in while implying that she's meant to be (whatever you have planned for her) until she actually starts to accept it as how she really feels that's how weasleton could win and how dark is his fantasies because I have two ideas but pm me on fanfiction.net (same pen name) because I wouldn't want anyone reviewing uncomfortable

schedule May 25, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I bet he could imagine himself leading a fully naked Elsa and Anna (walking or walk on all fours as they feel humiliated because they can't believe their pussies are wet from this humiliation and visible to everyone or same thing instead of feeling humiliation they are so broken that they like going out for walks with there master) out in public like in there town wearing only collars with there names on them with a chain leash to symbolise there surrender to the Duke the chain leash can also be long enough that he could have them masturbate with it by using one hand to grab the leash and rub it between there legs. Does any of this have a place in the future of this story?

schedule May 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Good opening, very interested to see more.  I know you can do this concept justice.

person Just a fan
schedule May 24, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Good to see you back.  Love the opening and can't wait for more.

Please don't forget your other stories though:)