Short compared to the last few chapters but overall nice to see more
Made my day to see this had been updated
Maybe the girls who have and will have sex with Lincoln should buy some lingerie, I can imagine Lynn wearing red lingerie while Lucy wears black, they could wear it when laying on their sides on the bed facing Lincoln because they want to have a threesome. Just an idea
I love it
comment for chapter 11
(“Now I kinda feel left out,” Luna realized.
Lincoln gave her a hug. “You have a girlfriend and I wouldn’t want to come between you, but if you’re ever single and in need, I’ll always be there for you.”
“Thanks Bro,” Luna said. “I doubt I’ll ever take you up on it, but I appreciate the offer.”)
I feel like somehow she is going to take up the offer, and her girlfriend will be involved, they'll all just wake up in his bed after a concert and sam will probably scream" oh god I slept with Lincoln," then Luna would sleepily say "We all have, now go back to sleep... also you now have superpowers."
First off, Another great chapter as usual and I see your having fun with this story too! And damn Luan and the girls being blunt like a baseball bat to the head! I was laughing at how poor Luna was getting goob smacked with what was going on.
I actually thought that Lisa could get that building pretty easy, heck she could get the land around and the road as her private drive way if she asked with pupy dog eyes to the right people. (lol) But I'm not surprised that they are all excited about their own bathrooms, I grew up with two siblings so yeah private heaven when you get the time alone in there.
Oh boy, so Luna flipped her bed...Okay slightly freaking out now with nerves or anticipation I don't know. Okay we're still on the Luna and Sam thing, like i've said before her character isn't fleshed out yet so, she's shaped by the authors who right her, and we'll probably see what happens next if Luna gets pregnant/super powers by osmosis...Man that felt weird typing that.
Well good or bad we get to see happens next. I love this story. Keep up the great work as always, thank you for the great work. Excelsior!!!
You are only getting better friend like the world building
the wait is the TUBE(chapter 13) noncannon to this or is that really where the story is going or what? For the record, if that doesn't play into the story you should say that becouse omake is something I had to look up and I'm only half sure what it means. This is why we need a proper comment system on this site.
Uuuufff that was a close one! I was getting mad because I thought the author was pulling *it was a dream the whole time*.
That little not that this chapter was only and omake makes me want the real new chapter already!
You Sir, Are Evil! I would love to see this chapter evolve into it's own thing! Gotta admit, I got sad when I thought you were putting an end to the rest of it. But reading the familie's reactions to the fanfic so far was hilarious (especially Lori's deadpans). I'm game for whatever other fan fiction you decide to do fam!