Great story, cant wait to see where it goes.
It's a nice execution of the otherwise tired tropes of the MC getting superhuman qualities and of Lisa facilitating the plot. Usually the later is an excuse for the author to not have to write good characters or motivations.
Lincoln's relationship and pre sex arc with each sister, while brief, is at least something.
Aging them up just a little bit works for keeping the loli-shota.
All the talk about possible impregnation is cool too. I hope that's not just something for the ending or epilogue. A follow up with some Sin Kids would be cool.
I was delighted to see that you'd updated this story, and even more delighted to see a fairly lengthy shout out to my story. Got a nice chuckle out of that, thanks :)
Great job, as always. Really like the way you write Lynn and Lincoln, they have a very nice, easy going relationship, but they're also adorable together. And as much as I enjoy the other sisters, particularly your take on Luan, its nice to get a little Lynncoln time every now and then. New plot development really threw me for a curve, looking forward to seeing where things go from here. Keep up the good work :)
Amazing story, impeccable writing, funyy humor, and most importantly of all, really, really arousing, this alone was enough for 3 days from how long and good it is, 1 suggestion for next part, Licoln and Linka, then Linka and everyone else, very similar to the older chapters but gender swapped, but in the end with their new powers Linka does it with Lincoln again and the (power concetration thing, don't ask me make up your own sceince) is enough to combine both universes into a über universe with all of them combined into 1 for infinite more kinky matchups, just a suggestion though I'm sure it'll be good no matter how you make it, navea nice day!
I love the SCP reference in the end. So glad this exists. Good work and keep it up. Made my day to see a new chapter
Really happy to see that this story has been updated since the last time I checked, it's consistently been one of my favorites since I stumbled upon it. Really looking forward to seeing how things pan out with Luna and the Twins (and Sam? Possibly?)
MERRY CHRISTMAS!!!!!! WELCOME BACK, ma it is great to see this chapter, and hear from you. Thanks for a tender chapter, the discussion about Twilight was excellent, and the can't say "I don't love you" is endearing for them.
I'm just so happy seeing this and enjoying it. Thank you.
Woo! Its back. Thanks for the update.
I'm glad to see you back here, and writing once more in this story, I was afraid that you were leaving it unfinished, which would've been quite a shame indeed.
I'm somewhat anxious to see the plot advance a little though, and I must confess that this chapter, while entertaining, felt really, really unnecesary or to say the least, filler-y.
Still, you've also made quite a lot of sense in some of your comments here, especially regarding Twilight itself, and not that I think about it, it makes sense that Lucy would want to share a story, as she seems, like Lincoln, to have inherited Rita's love for writing.
Still, as filler-y as this chapter felt, it was still, incredible and well written, I hope to see more of you here as well. And hopefully, that you also receive more attention and good reviews for your hard work.
Thank you for the effort and the story, they're greatly appreciated.
So happy to see another chapter up. I was honestly afraid this had become a dead story.
Loving the story
Will there be an update soon ??