The ending was superb
The alternate ending was also superb
Good work
Holy shit...this is dark, creepy, and yet pretty fucking hot! I love it!
I do love how you wrote the good and bad ending. That way we can be satisfied with either one, but in the same time we won't be left to wonder about the alternative. It was a good move on your part to add the bad ending as well.
Not enough Priyanka action in my opinion, but oh well.
I especially love how in the end, it wasn't just the Splinter that influenced their actions. The fact that deep down some part of them were still in control just made it that much hotter! Nice.
Happy Writing!
Now this is how you end a story. Glad you took the time to make the chapter and I hope you have a good day.
I aprreciated the alternate ending
You may need to do an alternate ending where the Splinter stays in control.
Chap 6, sigh, boring happy ending. Ah well.
I'm really loving this story, my kind of thing wink wink, I hope to see more soon dude. Maybe with jasper or bismuth.
I enjoyed chap4, hope to read more soon.
i am liking this story more and more! cant wait to see how it ends!