Ok, I just want to say that I've re-read this story from beginning to end for the 3rd time this week. I'm not kiddding, this story is that amazing. Like I was never in the loud house fandom and haven't watch the show in years at this point. But Lincoln and Leni were always my two favorite of the siblings and I've always shipped them as I felt the two had a certen charm together that no other character had. So let me say good sir that the way you've written you to not only feel in character but out right like a continuation of said characters if writers were to make a loud hous sequel so with the main cast all grown up. God I love the way you've written Lincoln and Leni's relationship, how it's clear as day to the reader that Lincoln clearly shares the same feelings for his sister as she does him but refuses to come to terms with them and stop being in denial until Leni not only corners him but also floors him with a confession that had 0 years worth of build up. And god the lemon, the lemon. Im a guy who enjoys lemon but never in my life would I think that a chapter dedicated to lemons would feel so earned and satisfying. The ending of chapter 5 and midpoint to chapter 6 hit me like a brick, really letting me know just how much Leni has been forced to suffer due to Suppressing her feelings for Lincoln.
Please, I beg of you, don't let this story be discounted, make a chapter 9. Please!!!!!
Happy New Year Doctor! I'm leaving this message here because I don't know what other sites you may be on. I hope you are well, I've missed reading your work this last year. Wish you the best in 2022!
I've been a lurker here for quite some time, I've followed this story from the very beginning, ever since you started it more than 3 years ago, and I have to say, this is one of the best stories I've ever read for any fandom. I'm sure you know this well, but it can be so hard to find well-written stories. I've seen so many great ideas ruined by authors with poor grammar or authors who tell too much or authors write everyone OOC. It's been such a breath of fresh air to read your story, and I appreciate how much time and work you put into each chapter. I do hope you update soon, but no matter what, whenever that is, I look forward to what you with the myriad of intriguing plot lines you've set up.
Dios!! Esta historia es demasiado fascinate, soy un gran admirador de tus historias y, pienso que eres el mejor escritor (de habla inglesa) de "the Loud house"
Dios!! Esta historia es demasiado fascinate, soy un gran admirador de tus historias y, pienso que eres el mejor escritor (de habla inglesa) de "the Loud house"