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for A Fairy for Gloomsville

by TheEvilFaery

schedule August 18, 2021 at 12:00 AM

This is a fun story. "Wicked Wishes" is the best costume-shop name ever, and I loved seeing Ruby's reaction to the risque outfits -- especially the one that Desiree selects for Ruby. I LOLed at "Everyone will…they’ll see my…and my…they’ll see everything!" and I loved Desiree's reply ("But you have such a cute everything"). Iris wanting to be spanked -- and good and hard, too -- was completely believable. Iris dissing the "power of love and friendship" cliche was perfect, as was the "loophole" of her breaking the spell because she already wanted to do what the spell was meant to force her to do. Thanks for an entertaining read.

schedule September 23, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Wow this was awesome, I'm surprised that there isn't more Ruby gloom stories on this site, both of your stories are great.