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March 30, 2022 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what to say about this. I enjoyed
the fact that you went into so much detail and that the chapters weren't just one big fuck-fest like mine, but...
Rallo and Stewie are literally toddlers... I'm not saying that I'm against toddler fucking, but you could have at least been vague about their ages. In one of my stories, I aged the characters by only a year, but I made sure to not mention that fact. I could
have done with less of the dog fucking, but I write stories that aren't any better. These are just some observations I thought I would give you.