And soon Kim will have "her needs" taken care of by the other 3 women while ron watches entusiastically.........
what the hell happened to the story?
Well I think you're doing great and Kim helping around the village could help get her figure back.
That was a great story, my favorite part was Ron foursome with him and his three girls, alot of guys wish they could do that.
This chapter was not a bad transition and setup chapter. It does give some foreshadowing as to how you might be looking to end the story.
I am looking forward to seeing how you decide to finish this story. Especially when you left Ron as an unfaithful and untrustworthy asshat who has no willpower nor idea what love really means. I still cannot believe he would so blithely break rules he had just setup less than an hour before because some girl he has spent maybe 23 days with (one week plus eight weekends) looks at him with "love in her eyes".
Yeah, scum bag that should really put her right up their with your best friend of sixteen years.
Anyways, looking forward to the conclusion. Good luck.
I think you're doing great.
I think you're doing great, maybe Ron's new girls once they learned what happened they could feel pity (I know I do) for Kim and a want to help her like Ron does so they let her join the harem so Kim doesn't have to leave Ron. If the friend you mentioned in the last chapter is in the real world or some other fanfiction site then hope whoever it is gives you a really good idea for the next chapter.
And Kim, for pretty much the first time this story, finally exhibits a truly loving characteristic. She finally places the feelings and well being of Ron, someone she professes to love, above her own desires.
Ron on the other hand pretty much cements his status as complete and utter asshole. He further demonstrates that he has zero clue what love, loyalty, or trustworthiness mean.
Seriously, who in the hell would tosses aside 14 years of friendship and two of a romantic relationship for some girl(s) that he knows almost nothing about and has only known maybe 14 days? An utter asshole, that's who.
Also, who in the hell abandons not only the person that they profess to love but their best friend during what is sure to be the most difficult time in their life. Those aren't the actions of a friend and they sure as hell aren't the actions of someone who loves you.
You did a good job with Kim in this chapter, but I don't recognize anything of Ron's character in these last two chapters.
I guess we will see how it ends next chapter.
Good side story.
I honestly don't know what to think of this chapter. One thing is certain Kim and Ron are done. There is zero realistic chance for their relationship to survive.
To be honest, at this point they are both disgusting human beings, who I hope end up miserable and alone. Neither one knows the first thing about love.
This is exactly why society scorns these types of relationships.
Also, unless you are a complete idiot and tie something around the neck common sense will allow you to learn about bondage safely.
As for not wanting me to beta. No big deal.