Another magnificent and interesting story
Great story! I'm very glad to see that you're spicing up yet another fandom.
So this Miraculous story was, well, miraculous! I have to agree with you, after watching a few episodes to get the gist of the show, that Ladybug has one of the best rumps in TV. She would have some very stiff (and perky and soft) competition if you compared her to some lovely ladies from CGI movies and video games, however ;-)
Anyway, the setup was great, it felt like something that actually could happen on the show (which I know is exactly your line of thought when writing this kind of stuff, so good job on keeping true to yourself ðŸ‘)
I also loved the effect Miss Match had on the other kids she used her powers on, especially Chloe. How many times do you think everyone wanted to tell her to go fuck herself? 🤣
The fight felt realistic, as did Lady and her bottle of lube XD
About the only thing I think would have made it better was Miss Match herself getting some satisfaction as Lady and Cat started to get it on. It was obvious that seeing people with the "correct" partner was a borderline fetish for her, so seeing her "crown jewel" of Lady and Cat come together should have at least meant some self love in that skimpy little number. Maybe the next story you write for this universe, the sexy bad girl gets some loving too, what do you think? Lol
Keep up the great work!
Joma
I have been reading your stories for some time and im always impressed how well you translate the characters into your work.
I can imagine this almost as an episode from the reaction of the charaters in the situation and how you have their lines in the story. I dont know if im explaining well enough it just seems like you capture the characters as they are in the show and that is lacking in alot of fanfiction.