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by TheForgottenOne

schedule February 21, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Glad this is a work of fiction and not really happening to someone, a very well done and detailed story especially using bounding Violet to the toilet and use her as a urinal, maybe she learned or her body to remain as tight when she use to be a virgin in both her pussy and ass. Is the next chapter gonna have Violet perform a lesbian sex show for the guys?

schedule February 20, 2017 at 12:00 AM

A very good chapter to a very good story. Just the right amount of twisted to get my jollies from.

The only knock against the story I have is that some of the paragraphs go on too long. They could use a space in the middle of them at least, some need broken up into two or three paragraphs.