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for Sense of Semblance

by sandman-nobody

person Latham02
schedule February 11, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That was great! I can't wait to see more!

person IGankMid
schedule February 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Definitely your best work with time-stop so far. I joined this site specifically to review this story- great read! Eagerly awaiting more naughtiness!

schedule February 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Created an account so I can review this. I've been a big fan of your Ron's Toys fic and throughly enjoyed this one. Glad to hear this'll be a more fun time than dark. Jaune doesn't seem like the type to go asshole, at any rate. Hope you keep this one going, I really enjoy it so far!

schedule February 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Hell to the yes, this looks like its going to be fun! So what exactly are the after affects of Juane's aura considering the affect it had on Yang, it seemed to leave her more susceptible to his presense. Am i close?

person SirOmega
schedule February 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Nice new story.

person Lavitz
schedule February 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

That was really good. I think, of all the stories you're writing, this is now my favorite. I can't wait for more.

schedule February 6, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Great Story i can't wait to read more :)