Truly fantastic. Another of my favorite stories, though sad to see this has fallen by the wayside a little. Any chance we could see more soon?
Just so you know I literally made this account so I could make this review
I love your style of writing and everything about it feels more like a romance novel where the sex is good but they're so much more your stuff's worth waiting for And I can't wait to read the next chapter I'm just glad you're still writing it
He thought he might be hallucinating for a second there... I loved it! I waited for this chapter for an entire year. Let me tell you, it was worth the wait! I suppose there's a reason that this story is my favorite active story, by far. The heart to heart between Weiss and Jaune was beautiful, especially Weiss' portion of it. And considering how awe-inspiring Jaune's side of it was, that was saying something!
How could she love someone so stupid? I seriously think Pyrrha needs to issue Weiss her membership card :)
I just wanted to let you know, that I've enjoyed your story so much that I finally registered with the site just to leave this review. Please keep up the great work, this chapter made my month!
I think that jaune should have a harem with Yang, Weiss and Pyrrha. The girls would not only love the idea because the three can share jaune but also have kinky foursome sex and with jaune semblance he could easily fuck three girls at the same time ;)
Chap 10, this continue to be a fun story, though i really wish there was some more full on sex. Well, fingers crossed.
Hope the girls Jaune knows/used his abilities on all stick with him the entire day ;)
Chap 6, very sexy, great detail on the sex which is so important. I wish he would abuse his power more, i dislike the moralizing and author assurances that he will `not go to far'.
Still very enjoyable, I hope for more like chap6.
Chap 1, promising start
Chap2, sexy, I hope he goes much farther with Yang
Chap 3, read your note. Personally I would like a darker path for this story, but I'll see how it goes.