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for How to Train Your Overlord

by Praetor

schedule June 16, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Few mispellings aside, this was another great chapter.

The bit of Merida meeting the other harem girls was really funny, especially Astrid, Ruffnut and Heather's bits.

And the sex scene was awesome like always.

person Nytefyre
schedule March 4, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I was worried initially about the direction the story was going to take, what with Hiccup becoming an “evil Overlord” - but have been pleased to see him retain his own personality.  

The mixing of Disney/Pixar princesses with HTTYD has been really well done... though the listing of some of the them leads to possible anachronisms.  I’m looking forward to more to come.

While it’s certainly spell-checked, there are lots of homonym/close sounding word misplacements...  for example “shuck” for “shook”.

Thanks for writing and sharing.

schedule January 21, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Another great chapter. Loved Merida's character, the way her body was enhanced and the smut scene involving her. Also really love these smalls scenes where the characters admire the enhanced girls' bodies.

schedule January 16, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Loving that you're continuing on with this story, can see a lot of different princesses and their kingdom being brought under the upstart Overlord's empire. Great to see you back, great chapter, can't wait to see more. This and Spellbound are my favourite fics of yours with my 2 favourite characters all-round getting attention from beautifully enhanced girls.

schedule January 5, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Good chapter, and a nice bit of plot development.  The use of "Let It Go" in Elsa's dialogue during the sex was a bit cheesy but harmless.  I take it that Anna is next?

schedule January 4, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Glad to see a new chapter!

Amazing job as always, loved the smut as well as the action bit, and I don't mind if it's a bit more plotty since I wanted the story the move along.

person Fenrir44
schedule August 15, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This is amasing fic will you add camicazi and skuld the Sorceress the harem and are going to use the movies that dreamwoks and disney has made as material for lands and women to conquer by the new dragon overlord 

schedule July 17, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This needs an update, I am loving this story.

schedule March 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Amazing new chapter, especially the orgy part.

schedule February 19, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Really enjoyed this chapter despite how short it was. Can't wait for more.