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for What's wrong with me?

by ItwasMerlin

person D
schedule June 11, 2021 at 12:00 AM

plz update 

person Anon
schedule June 7, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Very, very nice.

Mildew is extremely rare and I'm glad you are writing this. Hope to see the next update soon.

person Anonymous
schedule June 5, 2021 at 12:00 AM

You know, every time i read this i hope it'll end up with something like this

https://pbs.twimg.com/media/EzY2YYEVIAoZlkV?format=jpg&name=large

person migahiru
schedule May 24, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I accidentally skipped a few chapters of the previous ones and here's what I wanted to say. I like the direction in which the plot went and Astrid's torment looks quite consistent, so we need to build up this detail of the story and constantly put her in a hopeless position, so that she gets even more excited, and her inaccessibility slowly goes away in the coming days.

One more detail. Mildew was part of Drago's army in the last episode of Dragons Race to the Edge, and one more motive could be mentioned - to become Chief Berk and completely subdue Astrid, make her his chieftess, but to be Drago Bludvist's puppet indefinitely.

person c197
schedule May 23, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Interesting having Astrid disobey Mildew, maybe good chance for him to start defiling other girls too

person Anonymous
schedule May 22, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I prefer this turn of events

schedule May 21, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Chap13, not great, some sexy, mixed feelings.  Well, now that Hiccup's mum is here Mildew definitely has to start fucking her. 

person Anonymous
schedule May 20, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Even though there wasn't any sex between Astrid and Mildew, it was still hot that Astrid finally wanting Mildew to have sex with her. The part where Astrid touches herself while spying on Mildew was nice. And Astrid saying things she would say if she was in Ruffnut's place. But best of all, is when she made that deal to have Mildew have anal with her, and they she wanted it so bad.

In the next chapter, can you actually make Astrid say all those things when she has sex with Mildew again. And do a pregnant sex scene, make it hotter, that Astrid is having sex with Mildew with either Hiccup's kid or Mildew's. 

person hi
schedule May 20, 2021 at 12:00 AM
person Anonymous
schedule May 20, 2021 at 12:00 AM

great update! I'm glad it's just not all smut and there's actual plot