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for What's wrong with me?

by ItwasMerlin

person Anonymous
schedule July 5, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Very exciting, Mildew finally gets what he needs and now he needs to continue his pressure so that she is his bitch, including children.

person Bob
schedule July 5, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Great story! Can't wait for next chapter!

person Anonymous
schedule July 4, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Brilliant, I wonder what will happen next

person Raif333
schedule July 1, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Really loving it so far, really enjoyed Astrid spying on Mildew in the last chapter while he was with Ruffnut and starting to wish it was her so wouldn't mind seeing more of that, maybe with Mildew doing it deliberately in front of her to make her beg

person Anonymous
schedule June 24, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Streets need the chapter update quicker 🙏

schedule June 20, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Chap14, took soo long to get to him butt-fucking Astrid, but the scene was very sexy.  Well done.

I don't mind Mildew's paln to break Astrid, just takes soo long sometimes.  It is sexier when they keep their own mind but still submit.

Looking forward to Valka.  Maybe Ruff can also get involved.  Would like to see her sucking Valka or Astrids breasts or licking their holes to get them ready for her master. Would like some armpit licking.  Prefer them hairy but smooth is ok.  Would also like to read Ruff fisting one of the other girl's holes, or Astrid fisting Valka.

Looking forward to more

person Anonymous
schedule June 16, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Merlin, when are you going to give us a new chapter. Is Astrid going to finally break and go to Mildew? And since Valka is back, are you going to make her have sex with Mildew as well? That would be nice for Mildew, 2 blonde teen girls and 1 milf all to himself. And Hiccup doesn't have to know about it. And if you do put that, have a scene of a foursome, each one taking turns riding Mildew until each are filled up. Or even better, get Heather into this. 

person Anonymous
schedule June 16, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Merlin, when are you going to give us a new chapter. Is Astrid going to finally break and go to Mildew? And since Valka is back, are you going to make her have sex with Mildew as well? That would be nice for Mildew, 2 blonde teen girls and 1 milf all to himself. And Hiccup doesn't have to know about it. And if you do put that, have a scene of a foursome, each one taking turns riding Mildew until each are filled up. Or even better, get Heather into this. 

person Just a fan
schedule June 13, 2021 at 12:00 AM

This is the best httyd fic I've read . Please more 

person Anonymous
schedule June 13, 2021 at 12:00 AM

This is an interesting fanfic on httyd and the most exciting