A great idea with Valka, I want even more scenes between these two, since Mildew's revenge should be a priority.
We need that update, king!
It's interesting to come up with Valka, we are also waiting for something similar with Astrid. Although a gangbang here can be very perfect to look at.
Hey Merlin, Bob does have a point. Why not publish this story on AO3 or fanfiction. This story should be read by others if they knew about it.
Great story!! Also have you ever thought about publishing this story on other sites? Like archiveofourown? Feel like you would get more readers
“That’s it, Fuck my arse Mildew.”
That was the line where I made a mess.
Very epic story.
Great, go on!
Chap15. Overall very good. I really liked the scenes with Valka, love her thick pubes and the orgasms she could not fail to enjoy. Hope for more of her.
I found the constant switching between the scenes awkward. Just as I was getting into one I'd be pulled out of it by dropping back into the other. I would have preferred sticking with one at a time, or at least switching in for longer blocks.
Astrid's scene was pretty good, not as good as Valka. I would have enjoyed a few more `I'm a whore's as she was sodomizing herself.
Hope to read more soon
Best chapter ever. Mildew gets a MILF on as well. And it's Hiccup's mom, nice. The sex scene was really hot, especially when he told her to ride him, something Mildew wanted Astrid to do. Which I'm guessing will be anytime now, with Astrid getting ever so closely to breaking and be what Mildew wants her to be, his whore. And having Mildew have sex with Valka everynight or have her suck him off, easy way to break in his new sex slave. You already put Astrid spying on Mildew with Ruffnut, maybe next time, put in Astrid spying on Mildew with Valka, that would probably make her break even faster, knowing those two are getting something she so desperately want so badly. Or better yet, Mildew makes Astrid watch as he has sex with Ruffnut and Valka, making her see the thing she wants to badly not in her, and the only way she would be able to get it, is if she finally submits to Mildew willingly, and rides him until he finishes inside her.