We are looking forward to the next chapter.
A great idea with Valka, I want even more scenes between these two, since Mildew's revenge should be a priority.
We need that update, king!
It's interesting to come up with Valka, we are also waiting for something similar with Astrid. Although a gangbang here can be very perfect to look at.
Hey Merlin, Bob does have a point. Why not publish this story on AO3 or fanfiction. This story should be read by others if they knew about it.
Great story!! Also have you ever thought about publishing this story on other sites? Like archiveofourown? Feel like you would get more readers
“That’s it, Fuck my arse Mildew.”
That was the line where I made a mess.
Very epic story.
Great, go on!
Chap15. Overall very good. I really liked the scenes with Valka, love her thick pubes and the orgasms she could not fail to enjoy. Hope for more of her.
I found the constant switching between the scenes awkward. Just as I was getting into one I'd be pulled out of it by dropping back into the other. I would have preferred sticking with one at a time, or at least switching in for longer blocks.
Astrid's scene was pretty good, not as good as Valka. I would have enjoyed a few more `I'm a whore's as she was sodomizing herself.
Hope to read more soon