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by ItwasMerlin

schedule April 17, 2022 at 12:00 AM

How about using the Loki stone on Hiccup and turning Him into a girl then whore for mildew. And getting him to learn form Astrid how to please him.

person Anonymous
schedule April 14, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Well i was pleasantly surprised to see an update, hope to see them more frequently.

As for suggestions Mildew could grow suspicious of Astrid's behavour, and force her to tell him everything, including her fantasies about him and Valka, and her masturbation sessions. From there he could order her to never masturbate again and never experience another orgasm, unless he is actually fucking her. He could then force her to watch him, Valka and Ruff have sex, so that she grows more and more aroused, but cannot do anything about it until she begs him to join.

person Anonymous
schedule April 7, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Very cool!

person Anonymous
schedule April 2, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Brilliant continuation of chapter 16

person 784
schedule March 29, 2022 at 12:00 AM

It's a great sequel, and I didn't even hope anymore. I am also waiting for the further humiliation of Valka and the triumph of Mildew.

person Anonymous
schedule March 20, 2022 at 12:00 AM

That horn is always interrupting lmao. Great chapter! I hope the update comes soon 

person Anonymous
schedule March 19, 2022 at 12:00 AM

After almost a year of waiting, "add in wolf whistle", that was hot. Mildew and Ruffnut having sex with Valka, and making Valka think Ruffnut is Astrid, that made it even hotter. And with Mildew taking the other hole of Valka's. 

When are you going to put in the part where Asrid finally breaks down and willingly has sex with Mildew, like she catches Mildew alone and just jumps him and rides him like her life depends on it? The suspense if killing me, like the part where she wanted to just barg into Valka's home and take Mildew for herself. 

Overall, great chapter, really worth the wait. Hope your next chapter comes out in less time than this. 

person Anonymous
schedule March 19, 2022 at 12:00 AM

He's back!!

person Marley
schedule March 19, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Gracias por sibiry otro capítulo, ojala el siguiente salga mas pronto

person Itwasmerlin
schedule January 25, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Hi guys Merlin here . Sorry for the long wait I am working on the next chapter but a new job has made me incredibly busy . I hope it'll  calm soon.  

No writers block buy ideas are welcome. P.s the story that was linked to me was great . Mine will be different but I loved the story so people read it