Not bad, very good. Mildew has set a new goal for mastering Astrid's girlfriend. I am interested in this course of the narrative.
Is Astrid finally going to break and willingly has sex with Mildew after he had sex with Heather?
Maybe do a scene where Mildew has sex and impregnates all of his new sex slaves. And they do it during a trip for half a week or a whole week in a house at another island, where it is very secluded
This chapter is interesting, I'm not one of those who want Mildew to fuck everyone, honestly I just want to see how things happen between Mildew and Astrid, and how the blonde lets herself be completely consumed by desire. Hopefully the next chapter will show us a bit of this jealousy of Astrid and how Mildew will take advantage of it to take her to bed once again.
Oh heather's here? Yeah I'm gonna need that next chapter asap
Hi Paul- you can share on here or you can mail me at merlinitwas@gmail.com
I shouldn't really reply on reviews as they get a little annoyed but feel free either way
Hi Merlin,
I have a story line i would like to share with you re Astrid / Mildew in your great sory " what is wrong with me?" .... is this review page for everyone to see or do you read them privately and then put select ones out for public consumption ? .. I am not sure that you would use a story line once it has been seen by everyone ... cheers
Merlin here. Thought I would chime in . (Although it may get deleted.)
Massive thanks to the amazing amount of reviews that have flooded in. Gives me more push to write. It seems people are already planning the final and it to be finished . I wasn't planning an end just yet lol
I am working to get the next chapter out . I've already wrote one chapter but it's got nothing sexual and I want this to have its next part ready .
Love the ideas and hold tight may be a while but when I've spare time I do go straight to writing this .
Thanks again
Merlin
I started to read this great story only recently, I hope the next chapter will arrive soon.
As for suggestions, I think it's time for Astrid to finally willingly submit. Mildew can force her to admit what she felt watching them the previous evening. Then, he can oblige her to continue to watch the theesome, forbidding her to masturbate until Astrid accepts to have sex with him without the use of the stone.
I have also a final scene for the story: Astrid and Valka are pregnant with Mildew's children. They are fucking with Mildew in front of Hiccup, humiliating him. Hiccup starts to masturbate saying: "Wha's wrong with me?"
Solis Mirk's idea for the final scene is perfect. What better way to end it than to show Hiccup that not only did her lose his wife and mother, but he loses his dignity.
when I read that idea for the final scene, why not put something before that. Like, Astrid finally breaks down and willingly has sex with Mildew. This goes on until Astrid and Valka are a few months pregnant together. Then one day, Mildew tells Astrid to tell Hiccup that him and Ruffnut and Valka are going to Hiccup's house for dinner. But what Hiccup doesn't know is that when it is time for dessert, he gets mind controlled by the stone to stay in his seat and watch as Astrid, Valka, & Ruffnut have sex with Mildew in front of Hiccup. It started out with a blowjob, Astrid says out loud about how much she misses having Mildew in her mouth. This continues until all three gets facials, but they don't clean it off. Then Mildew shows Hiccup how much the girls want him by sitting in a chair opposite of Hiccup, and have them ride Mildew one at a time until they are filled with his load or when he is ready for his next whore. And the best part is that even thought Hiccup is forced to remain seated, he is still able to talk and move, but only to masterbate. He has no choice but to watch as Mildew pounds his wife and mother and finishes inside them multiple times. Astrid and Valka even show how much they love being Mildew's whores. And admit to Hiccup with Mildew's load on their face and inside them, they tell him that they are pregnant with Mildew's child and that from now on, they will be nothing more than whores for Mildew, in secret. And Hiccup is not allowed to say anything or else be shamed at Berk which leads him to self-exile. And it goes on forever, that they had Mildew's and Valka's house moved to be near or next to Hiccup's house. Mildew has to make sure his whore are nearby and always ready to go. And the only thing Hiccup could do whenever he is done with his chief duties, is watch Mildew having sex with his whore's no matter which house, and take care of the kids when they want quiet when having sex.