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for What's wrong with me?

by ItwasMerlin

person Gambinoooo
schedule May 26, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Hope you're having a great day Merlin, hope the next chapter is out soon, can't wait

person Anonymous
schedule May 25, 2022 at 12:00 AM

We need that update 🙏🏽

schedule May 20, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Well he did promisse that he would not approach Heather, but if she approached him...

person Madoney
schedule May 20, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Can you give an estimated date for the next chapter?

person Anonymous
schedule May 12, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Great update! I hope mildew goes back on that promise lol. Also, maybe at some point in the story, you can have him and Astrid spend a period of time alone together. 

person Dragonite
schedule May 9, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Amazing :)

person Nathan
schedule May 7, 2022 at 12:00 AM
person Anonymous
schedule May 6, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Brilliantly, I wonder what Mildew will do: listen to Astrid without touching Heather or, on the contrary, use his advantage and make Heather a sex slave.

person Anonymous
schedule May 5, 2022 at 12:00 AM

I say ASStrid is jealous that Heather could steal her spot...

person Anonymous
schedule May 5, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Nice scene, even though it was not willingly, she still got off from riding Mildew. Making it one step closer until she finally submits. 

Are you going to put in a Mildew and Heather sex scene? After making Astrid think he will uphold his end of the deal, he still goes and has sex with Heather.

Have Heather do things he would want Astrid to do; suck him off, ride him, get filled up. And the best part, Astrid is standing outside when she saw Heather walking up to Mildew's hut. And instead of getting angry with Mildew for going back on the deal, she gets angry at Heather for taking what was her's. Then the next night; she goes back, not saying anything after Mildew opens the door, she pushes him to his bed, strips down nude, takes out his cock and rides him until morning. She keeps calling herself his "whore" or "slave", turning him on even more that he turns them until she is lying beneath him, but she is still enjoying what belongs to her.