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by ItwasMerlin

schedule April 24, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Chap10, very hot, good anal. Hope to read more soon. Maybe he should fuck her dragon also, since Astrid and her are so close. Could be a good bonding experience. I hope you are feeling better.

PS I hope this ends with Astrid firmly owned by Mildew.  No `rescue' nonsense

person Anonymous
schedule April 23, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Another great chapter, and you finally put in an anal scene, nice. Keep up the good work. 
 

Maybe you should put in a scene where Astrid has sex with Hiccup, and when she has sex with Mildew again, she realizes she gets more satisfied with mildew. So mildew can use that fact to his advantage to break her.

it would be better if the dream was real, where Astrid and Hiccup are married and Astrid cheats on him with Mildew, to satisfy her needs that Hiccup can't. But Astrid would have Hiccup's children. She only uses Mildew to relieve her itch.

person Anonymous
schedule April 22, 2021 at 12:00 AM

really enjoyed chp 9. Hope for more to come 

person Anonymous
schedule March 31, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Cant wait for the next update!

person Adonisaquarian
schedule March 29, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Hey Merlin.. Any chance of an update for Wrong Night Wrong Man your Castle story ?

really loved that fic. 

schedule March 18, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Chap9, good chap, enjoyable.  Hopefully we'll read a lot more of Astrid being fucked, eventually in the butt as well.  Maybe that will break her.

Most of the words speak of too much plot, but hopefully it will be sexy. I'd like her to get knocked up and read some preggo sex. Dragon sex would also be fun.  Hope to read more soon.

person Anonymous
schedule March 15, 2021 at 12:00 AM

FINALLY lol

person Anonymous
schedule March 13, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Talk about keeping us in suspense. Been waiting for a new chapter after the last. But after a while, you came up with an amazing chapter. And this time, you write about Astrid losing her virginity to Mildew. Keep up the good work. Looking forward to the next chapter, and very curious about what the hints will come about in the story. 

Side question: how long are they going to have sex, because in the chapter, you put something about a "Hofferson Quest", how many days is Mildew going to break in Astrid before they return to Berk? Because it would be very interesting if Astrid's mind broke after a few sessions and she can only think about getting pleasure from only Mildew, even after getting married to Hiccup. 

person Anonymous
schedule March 10, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Really diggin the last two chapters. can't wait for more to come

schedule March 4, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Chap8, good to see another part.  Maybe he can fuck the dragon also, that should mess with Astrid.  Looking forward to more