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by ItwasMerlin

person Anonymous
schedule May 11, 2021 at 12:00 AM

How about in the next chapter, after Astrid gets caught by Mildew, her whore side comes out. She surprise Mildew by telling him to close and lock the door, after he does, she pounces on him, pulls down his trousers and gives him oral sex willingly. Then she would do what she did in chapter 5, where Mildew fantasized Astird stripping and riding him willingly, and as a bonus, tells him to finish inside her, and some anal as well, all of this going on until sunset. Then she makes a deal with him, that she will still marry Hiccup and have his children, but this time like she has been dreaming, cheats on Hiccup with Mildew for real and enjoys it. It would go on for years until Mildew dies. With Hiccup, Astrid is a loyal wife, but with Mildew, she is a cheating whore who loves having Mildew inside her more than Hiccup.

person Anonymous
schedule May 10, 2021 at 12:00 AM

You know i had completely forgotten about this story for the longest of time. Glad to see it continuing.

I hope Mildew has the brain to play dumb if Astrid ever mentions her dreams, it's more fun to let her keep believing its her own body and mind to betray her

schedule May 7, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Chap11, at least it was short. Looking forward to chap12.

person migahiru
schedule May 7, 2021 at 12:00 AM

And what if Mildew once again uses the Loki stone to win Astrid's mind, but before that he uses her and tells her everything that has happened to her in recent weeks.

Astrid would have tried to get out of there first, but without success, and no one would believe her. Mildew, in turn, will do everything to ensure that she obeys only him, and despite the annoying intrusion on her part, already now intends to seriously engage her. Including trying to upset her marriage to Hiccup, or at least delay it indefinitely(possibly as an option).

And since he now intends to make Astrid his sex slave, he will begin to have more effective ways to influence her (albeit her relatives).Mildew will use any method to finally master her to perfection, so that she will finally recognize him as her lover and her chief.To do this, he will use it again in different poses of dominating sex, improving himself and giving Astrid orgasmic pleasure from the process. And so that she shyly forgot about Hiccup and also shyly remembered in her head, namely that it was not Hiccup who deprived her of her virginity and not to him she gave a blowjob, but to the hated man in all the Berk - Mildew.

person ANON
schedule May 6, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Intriguingly, I hope the story of Mildew/Astrid will not end, but I want more.

person Anonymous
schedule May 6, 2021 at 12:00 AM

I hope Mildew punishes Astrid for the intrusion with something intimately dominant. At least I hope she doesn't know about Loki's stone. But I'm glad to see Chapter 11 coming.

person Anonymous
schedule May 6, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Feels like a long time coming lol. Can't wait for the next faze

person migahiru
schedule May 5, 2021 at 12:00 AM

The magnificent 10 chapter. I have been reading your story for a long time and I really hope that it will not end.

I had an idea what if Mildew cast a spell on Astrid's Loki stone again the next night. But this time, the hypnotized Lars will also play a role in the end, seeing his daughter copulating with Mildew and Lars as a cheerful utterance:

"Astrid, dear! I'm proud of you!”  Or something like that

Naturally, Lars was under the influence and his thoughts were controlled by Mildew. Astrid by this time already gets an orgasm from fucking with an old man and enjoyed it. Also, the mind of the real Astrid fades in favor of her second part-a whore. And all the more so because she no longer remembers Hiccup, but wants more oral sex and attention from her rapist.

 

person ANON
schedule May 5, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Oh, I want more from Mildew/Astrid. Keep up the good work!

person Anonymous
schedule April 29, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Loved the new chapter!