This is of course very good, but I wanted more Mildew/Astrid
Well that was unexpected. If you're gonna have Mildew fucking other girls I'd suggest adding heather
You should have Mildew do a contest between Astrid and Ruffnut, to see who can give him the most pleasure. The nearly broken Astrid who wants something bigger to fill her needs or Ruffnut who doesn't mind being used by Mildew in any way.
Chap12, pretty good, looking forward to next time
I've been waiting for a lot, and now I'm waiting for changes with Astrid.
Chapter 12, now that was unexpected, but hot. Mildew with two whores now, nice. And Astrid's body betraying her, telling her that she needs Mildew inside her. Hope you make a chapter where Mildew has sex with both Astrid and Ruffnut. To Mildew, one whore who is married but wants him not her husband, and the other who enjoys Mildew no matter what. And you should definitely use one of the other reviewer ideas, about pregnant sex.
Chapter 12, now that was unexpected, but hot. Mildew with two whores now, nice. And Astrid's body betraying her, telling her that she needs Mildew inside her. Hope you make a chapter where Mildew has sex with both Astrid and Ruffnut. To Mildew, one whore who is married but wants him not her husband, and the other who enjoys Mildew no matter what. And you should definitely use one of the other reviewer ideas, about pregnant sex.
Unexpected, but carry on.
i think that from here she gets pregnant with his child and her pregnancy increases the power of the loki stone
ps pls include pregnant sex!
I'm really looking forward to Astrid / Mildew