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by ItwasMerlin

schedule October 30, 2025 at 12:00 AM

Hi, I wanted to know if you were going to continue the story. I think we all wanted to see Astrid finally give in to Mildew. We need more pleasurable moments between those two, with Astrid becoming even more receptive to Mildew.

person Rudo
schedule May 30, 2025 at 12:00 AM

Great work so far. I like the other stories the author writes aswell, but I think this is by far the best story he's written . This story probably has the potential to become much bigger (I would estimate something around 60-80 chapters) than most people would think, but of course it's hard for someone to do it all alone so the community must help the author to stay motivated. @Merlin If there is anything we can do, I think every reader would be grateful to know how we can speed up the process of writing this story.

 

schedule May 12, 2025 at 12:00 AM

The situation is escalating, I want another session with Mildew and Astrid, so that she gives in, Mildew will have her and she will enjoy it too.

schedule December 25, 2024 at 12:00 AM

Enjoyed chap20, hope to read more soon.  The yuri scene was decent.  Valka should just go right back in again.  Fisting or at least fingers would be great, maybe tongue Astrid's butt also.  Great story!

schedule November 3, 2024 at 12:00 AM

Hopefully the next chapter will be Mildew and Astrid, those are the best moments, we need another session between those two, with Astrid being even more receptive to him.

schedule July 16, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Hello, I wanted to know when you were going to update the story, if you feel that it is taking too long you can rush things, have Astrid confront mildew when she finds out that heather was fucked by him, and have mildew intelligently ask her if she is jealous, and then Approaching Astrid, she begins to kiss her neck, telling her that if she is not jealous then she will reject him at that moment and she would never touch her again, but for Astrid to remain silent because she knows that deep down she wants it and at that moment turn her neck allowing her to kiss mildew more, and right there mildew doesn't delay him any longer and takes her to bed where he will finally fuck her completely and she gladly accepts it, completely blocking out any hint of guilt, letting the old man have her once and for all

schedule February 19, 2023 at 12:00 AM

Chap19 very sexy, glad to see you posting again.  I'd like to see more Valka, including her getting knocked up.  Also can Mildew have sex with Astrid's dragon?  That seems like a good way to get in her head...

person Anonymous
schedule October 5, 2022 at 12:00 AM
person Danny
schedule October 5, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Please update :(

person Peter
schedule September 9, 2022 at 12:00 AM

Hello, I wanted to know if you still intend to update the story, you left us with the intrigue. I want to see how astrid ends up submitting to mildew and how the old man will enjoy that triumph of having the beautiful blonde at his disposal at her own wish.